Weekly Video Updates

Make Cycles

Our course is organized by two week “make cycles,” a term I borrow from Connected Learning. You can find the weekly tasks for each cycle in the drop down menu above.

Google+ Community

We will share most of our work in a Google+ Community. We will upload images, respond to each other’s ideas, and share links and “makes” here.

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Featured Curators Make Cycle 1: Krystina, Krystle, Marc, Megan, and Rebecca

Featured Curators Make Cycle 1: Krystina, Krystle, Marc, Megan, and Rebecca

Krystina Hockman

Make Cycle 1 has been all about introductions. We first met one another and found a lot of similarities amongst ourselves. Next, we discovered that a lot of us shared many similar opinions about literacy and discovered that we all write every single day, whether through text, emails, or for school. This provided us with a great introduction to the importance of writing and is necessary as we transition from college student to future educators as we must be able to emphasize this importance to our students as well. Krystal Bandith’s introduction post summed up the importance of writing beautifully with the following excerpt:

When you practice writing, you practice the ability to organize and articulate the endless stream of thoughts and emotions you experience every day. When you do that, you open the door to learning incredibly useful things like self-awareness, communication, emotional intelligence/empathy, critical thinking.

In Weeks 1 and 2, we had the opportunity to read some powerful works meant to provoke critical thinking about how we write and not just what we write. Up until this point in most of our academic and professional lives, we wrote with purpose and with an audience in mind; however, we now must pay attention to exactly how we accomplish these writing goals so that we can teach our students to do the same.

The children’s book What Do You Do With an Idea? introduced readers to a child who had an idea that was unique and their own but sometimes burdensome, as most ideas can sometimes be. Children have these “ideas” and sometimes lack the ability to express them fully so that others, especially adults, may understand. Bailey Hunn took a great analytical stance on the purpose of this story and discussed whether books like this are too complex for children and posed the question, “At what age do they start to have those deeper conceptual thoughts and before that age what do they think of this book?” I think her insight is an important one to consider as we, as educators, must make thoughtful decisions in the books we introduce to our students as we want to make sure that they are age-appropriate and thematically relevant to their lives.


Youth literacy is a topic that many of us who aspire to teach will put many efforts into understanding. In Andrea Lunsford’s “Our Semi-Literate Youth? Not So Fast,” the author quickly introduces us to the term “life writing.” A lot of older people would say that our “life writings” (i.e. texting, emailing, Tweeting) are harming our literacies but Lunsford’s study proves otherwise. Daniela Quintana Munoz expresses the importance of our social media use to our literacy mastery by stating, “The internet is not frying our brains, but it’s helping us develop a range of different writing styles, tones, and formats.” As we move into teaching, we must remember that “life writing” will be a great way to break down the barriers of writing that many of our students will face. The linguist John McWhorter offers his insights into texting and its effects on literacy in “Txtng is Killing Language. JK!!!” by suggesting that texting is closer to speaking than it is to writing but that the utilization of text has transformed into a new “language” thus making youth “bi-lingual.” By offering as many avenues as possible for students to explore their own literary preferences, we are only encouraging their growth as readers and writers.

Chrysanthemum, a children’s book about a girl who found herself bullied for her long and unique name, used repetition throughout to capture the attention of the reader as they embraced a word that was hard to pronounce and followed the child through her evolution from being embarrassed by her name to loving the uniqueness of her name. The repetition forced the reader to pay attention and memorize the rhythm of the book; in fact, most of us mentioned that they remembered reading this book when they were children, which further enforces the importance of repetition as a literary device. Again, Krystal offered an eloquent analysis of the book’s repetition and the way it “highlight[s] the change which is usually the positive outcome or resolution. This way, children are able to follow the emotional transformation of the plot intuitively, and thereby understand the message/moral of the story.

Both “A Girl Named Jack” and “Second Daughter’s Second Day” by Jacqueline Woodson used repetition as their literary device; however, the repetition was in the formatting rather than the words themselves. Each stanza was carefully formatted and then repeated again to help drive home the poem’s theme. The conversational format of “A Girl Named Jack” allowed the reader to follow the parents as they discussed the newborn’s name but the repetition allowed the reader to feel caught in the middle, just as the baby might have felt. In “Second Daughter’s Second Day,” repetition was used to go back and forth from what was happening within the hospital and out in the world, forcing the reader to feel the constant pull between the safety of a newborn in a hospital and the uncertainty faced by African-Americans who must live outside of those safe walls. Laurence Gammell was inspired by these pieces too and offered a great lesson plan idea of asking his students to write a story behind their names to give him a “better understanding [of] each one of my students” and to create lesson plans based upon “student cultures in the classroom.

We wrapped up Make Cycle 1 with our very first makes! The class created many wonderful poems and stories that offered the rest of us insight into each other’s personal lives. The excitement was evident as most (if not all!) of the shared pieces were well-crafted and took an immense amount of time and effort to complete. From books about our pets to stories about our families, this Make Cycle proved that many of us have a flair for creative writing and should we choose to teach, will have no problem imparting this passion on our future students. The ‘ABCs’ style of writing would be a great project for our future students. My favorite example of this style of storytelling was the piece by Sophia Bambino and like some of our readings, it was incredibly personal and made us feel like we could relate to her without ever having met her in person.

After discussing names and the importance behind them, the majority of us took to writing a piece that shared a bit of reflection on our own names and what they meant to us. A great piece with the theme of “name” was crafted by Olivia Najera. She incorporated repetition into her poem and could be a great inspiration to future students as we teach them how to write a poem:

Olivia, Olivia, Olivia
That is my name
Although I have more and go by
Oli, Olive and Liv
Olivia, Olivia, Olivia
A name I wanted to change
Until I learn to love it
And love it to this day
Olivia, Olivia, Olivia
the name that defines who I am
the one that makes me me
and forever I will be
Olivia, Olivia, Olivia
The girl who didn’t like her name
Now loves it after all
And spreads joy everyday.
It was very clear that Olivia was inspired by Chrysanthemum as well as the two poems we read. Like Chrysanthemum, she repeated her name in a way that ensured the reader did not forget it!

I am absolutely blown away by the commitment our class made to this first Make Cycle! From start to finish, the contributions were plentiful and well thought out. I am very excited to see how we grow as writers and future educators throughout the rest of the semester.

Author Bio: Krystina is a recent transfer from Solano Community College and a former Dean’s Assistant at the same college. She is moving to Seattle, WA to live with her fiance, who is a member of the Coast Guard. She is working toward a Multi-Subject credential and then hopes to pursue a Master’s degree in Instructional Technology. Outside of school, her hobbies include gaming, reading, writing, and cooking.


Krystle Duggins

When it came down to our first day of classes, most of us were nervous about how our online class with Professor Jaxon would go. Fortunately, these past three weeks have shown how much we are capable of. Our hard work shows we are no longer nervous anymore, but ready and looking forward to the next assignment. I will reflect what we have accomplished so far in Make Cycle 1 during these past 2 weeks, as well as choose some examples from my peers that I thought were very interesting and eye opening.

On the first day, we were asked to sign up with Google +, a discussion board where we can communicate with one another and post our responses from our readings and then introduce ourselves to the rest of the class. This helped us get to know each other and establish a community among the discussion board. This made responding to others’ work much easier: rather than responding to name and a face that we have information about as a person. Many of us included some information about our past, present, and finally what we hope to accomplish as teachers. Along with this information we expressed our thoughts on writing and what counted as writing in today’s world.

Within week one of school, we were required to respond to three separate texts. The first text, What Do You Do With An Idea? by Kobi Yamada, told a story about a little boy who got neglected because others thought his idea was not practical. However, little by little the idea began to grow and the little boy began accepting his idea once more. His idea, at the end of the story, should how much his idea could positively change his environment and the people around him. The second text, “Our Semi- Literate Youth?” Not So Fast?” by Andrea Lunsford, is an article that showed the positive side of today’s technology and how it does not affect the writing that students do. While the third and final text, “Txing is Killing Language. JK!!!” by John McWhorter, shows that our modern society uses texting to communicate. It has developed its own form of language that does not limit the skills that students possess when writing essays or emails. McWhorter explains that we were never able to write the way we talked with the limited technology we had before smartphones. After reading everyone’s responses to these three texts, I found Kaylin Renfo’s work interesting. She talked about how much she loved the authors, Lunsford and McWhorter, defending the younger generation and their way of communication. She describes that even though texting is seen as a nuisance, it can lead to many advancements, like a new language that allows us to write the way we talk. Overall, I think she did amazing work on this discussion.

Week two of classes, we looked at another three forms of writing. The first, Chrysanthemum by Kevin Henkes, is a childbook story about a little mouse going to her first day of school. As the teacher does roll call of everyone names, the children began to make fun and laugh at Chrysanthemum’s name. They said it was too long and not having a special meaning other than a flower. They told her to change it into a more normal name. However, after a teacher and her parents told her that her name fit perfectly and nice as a flower can be. She then began to love her name and everyone soon accepted who she was. The second text, “A Girl Named Jack” by Jacqueline Woodson, is a poem that tells a story about a father wanting to name his daughter “Jack.” This name was supposedly to toughen her up without even knowing what her personality will be later in life. The mother, on the other hand, did not believe a boy’s name would make a difference. Eventually they ended with a compromise with the name Jacqueline. The third text, “second daughter’s second day” also by Jacqueline Woodson, is a poem about the African America community facing injustices. The character describes the leaders who spoke up about the injustices and now does not know what to feel about her future. Will she be as great as them or will time tell? In all texts, the authors were able to make words stand out with italics. This promoted the importance of the word in each story/ poem. I found Marc Blair’s discussion quite interesting when he read “A Girl Name Jack.” He describes not using, “…the name as a reason for her to toughen up.” This helps a person to indicate what was the real moral of the story and the importance that a name does not define the person. It is the personality that the child has developed.

For our last assignment of Make Cycle 1, we were asked to write a story or poem about how we got our name, the story of our birth, or a personal story in general. We were also given two options on how we were going to submit this assignment. One option was to type our story/ poem with a program called StoryJumper. This program allows you to create a power point like story that includes adding our own voice to the assignment. The second option was writing a standard poem in Google +. When reading everyone’s posts on this assignment, I was amazed how well everyone did. Most of them were so beautifully articulated. I especially enjoyed reading Krystal Bandith’s poem. Here is an excerpt of her poem:

“Krystal, with a K”

If my name started with a C

Would I be more like me?

C-R-Y my parents standing by

Why does she cry, cry, cry?

 

If my name started with a C

Would I be more brilliant?

Shiny, pretty, perfect

Tough, diamond-like resilience?

 

My name doesn’t start with C

But I have a T-A-L

To be talented at walking tall

To talk the tales I tell

 

My name is Krystal with a K

As in kind, keen, and kooky

Krystal with a K

Like in case you thought you knew me

 

K because I kuestion everything

K because I kan

 

K as in Krys, like

This:

I

Am

She wrote about how she got her name. My name is one of the same, but quite different. I understood her story from a personal level. She included a line repeatedly as part of the first line of almost each stanza. I felt like this was a perfect example that a name doesn’t define who we are, but we can still resonant some good aspects from it. Krystal describes her poem being about, “…a journey to becoming me, as defined only by me.” This poem puts a lot of thought on different aspects and parts of her name that leaves the reader questioning about his or her name. Am I defined by my name or do I defy who I am? It also produces a nice connection between the poem “A Girl Name Jack.” This is another reason why I choose Krystal’s poem it related to another assignment showing we can use what we learned.

Overall, I am very happy to look over each of my classmate’s discussion for Make Cycle 1. I have found this experience quite enjoyable and educational. I have learned from many own viewpoints. Each assignment was done so beautifully. I am looking forward to learn more from this class. I hope you guys enjoyed this response/ reflection on Make Cycle 1. We did so great! Let’s keep it up! I am ready for the next assignment. Are you?

Author Bio: I am from Yuba City, CA and I have recently moved up to Chico to further my studies in Liberal Arts. I ended up going to Chico State because my great elementary school teachers I once had graduated from Chico State. I learned so much and they inspired me to become a teacher to inspire others. I graduated from River Valley High School and Yuba College. I have associates in Social and Behavioral Sciences. My interests include video games, anime, drawing, and music. I love playing RPG video games because they tell a story: a story we can learn from and take away into reality. 


Marc Blair

The first cycle allowed the classmates to not only complete our assignments and be creative by creating a storybook or poem, but it also allowed the class to introduce ourselves. We introduced ourselves  through different ways and in some cases gave a bit of information about our family. When writing, influences and inspiration can come from anywhere and those influences show in writing. As one student, Madison La Ray, explained in her writing, her name is connected to her parents showing her own personal man, woman, and child triangle of life. A connected family not just by blood but by name.

“La” for La Ray

The start and the end of my name is very easy to explain.

Madison from my mother, Lozada from the other.

Now, the other of course being my father, has an extra name of his own to give.

It’s a part of his first name, the one to identify who he is.

Cristopher Raymond.

To sum the story up, and to make it go by faster.

To make this poem easy to understand. To keep it from being a disaster.

The part of his name, that I call mine, is the second part Ray.

It’s the middle part of my own, he named me Madison La Ray.

I’m a girl and he is not, so he had to make a small change.

So, to honor our Mexican heritage, and to make this make more sense.

He made it very simple, by adding “La” to begin.

Other students told simpler stories but yet just as personal. Bailey Hunn created her own storybook to tell her story of finding her first best friend. Her best friend in this case was her cat.

Even with the few pages and words used for younger audiences, Bailey in those few pages told what type of person she is. Her big heart is shown as she tells of her adopting a cat from a shelter. Less is certainly more and you can understand the cat found love in Bailey just as Bailey found love in her cat Roku.

Behind keyboards, today’s world tends to be a bit more open than usual. We share a lot, some say too much, some get some relief in finding others relatable to their own lives. Students like Rebecca Carney shared her story of her journey to Cal State Chico as a mother with a family. I myself shared similar information thinking maybe one day our stories can provide some assistance, confidence or just something cool so that others can maybe relate and stay focused on their goals. Any goal is possible, I think sometimes we tend to feel alone, defeated, or organized. But I think the coolest thing is the internet and communities like this class that allows everyone to find or stumble onto that one thing that may make a difference to keep them going.

Author Bio: My name is Marc Blair and I am a senior (online) here at Cal State Chico. I live in Riverside, CA (southern California). It’s been a long road since I am a non traditional student having came back to college at 32 after being a “corporate guy” for 10 years. I got tired of having a “job” and wanted my own “career” in teaching. I transferred from Coastline Community College into Chico which has been great (all online). I love sports, video games and graphic novels. My wife of 13 years and I juggle our time between work and spending as much time as we can with our kids Jack (1 year old), Zoey (13) and Chase (11). Their sports take up a great portion of that but we wouldn’t trade it for anything.


Megan Gatzka

I enjoyed listening to the mentor videos and gained insight by truly listening to the details as the reader spoke. The story about Chrysanthemum had several features that resonated with me. Throughout the book, the author compares Chrysanthemum herself as a person with an actual flower and describes aspects that correlate both. Words such as ‘wilted’ and ‘let’s pick her’ use descriptive words that work for both subjects. My favorite line in the story is “and she was…absolutely perfect.” This reminds me of the stories my parents told of my adoption. At three days old, my parents adopted me and brought me home. My dad’s song for me has always been “Isn’t She Lovely” by Stevie Wonder and I love this line from the book. If I were to write my own book, I would use the model of making an example as with Chrysanthemum’s teacher. The admiration the students felt for her made them rethink the way they made fun of Chrysanthemum. Borrowed elements I would consider using would be the constant repetition and compare and contrast to an object.

Within the story “A Girl Named Jack” the father is precluded to believe that his name, “Jack,” is a strong name and will make his daughter strong as well. My favorite line was when he states, “Raise her right, my father said, and she’ll make that name her own.” He doesn’t believe that a name makes the person and I believe that. In my own writing I would model this by breaking down the name as the story did from Jacqueline to Jack and show both sides of the story.

The features that resonate with me in the “Second Daughter” was that the author went back and forth between current events and how they relate to the girl in the story. My favorite lines in the story were “…ready to change the world” and “You can become anything.” These were wonderful lines to use to describe what world leaders were showing these children what they could become. Modeling this poem in my own writing would be fairly easy as it doesn’t rhythm. Comparing the second daughter to great leaders and historical people of color was able to show what she is capable of.

I recently read the book What Do You Do With An Idea? because I had just received a new copy in our school library. There is such a deep meaning in the text about not giving up on your dreams. It helps students to see how ideas form and why they have ideas at all. If it is a really good idea and something the student believes in, it will begin to nag them just like it did in the story. The emotions the little boy goes through are vast. First he is afraid to talk about his idea and bottles up his emotions which is never good. However, as the story goes on, students learn that pursuing your dreams makes you feel better. It gives you confidence to face the negative people tell you you’re different. I believe the moral of the story is that if we word hard to accomplish our goals and think outside of the box, anyone can change the world.

John McWhorter made me think about texting in this day and age. As a non-phone person, texting for me is a miracle drug. I like the messages short and sweet and absolutely despise group texts. Mr. McWhorter called this era a balancing act of emergent complexity. What this means is that writing a text is equal to our speech. Nobody talks the way they write an essay or a report About halfway into the video I realized that I wasn’t paying attention to what Mr. McWhorter was saying because he literally wasn’t coming up for air. I’m not sure if anyone else felt anxious over the way he rambled. There were no periods in his speech and no pauses to digest the information he was giving. Tell me I wasn’t the only one?

I believe all of the discussions were interesting, but the one the stuck with me the most is “What Do You Do With an Idea?” The lesson really broke down how to view the story from different perspectives and through students eyes. In the classroom, this would be an excellent exercise to break down the story and pull from it the underlying meaning.

In addition to the readings this week, we created our own artifacts using the mentor texts as models. Here are some standouts I chose among our Makes this week:

Krystine Hockman: The format in which Krystine used to create her poem was pleasing to the eye. The contrasting colors of the red, white and blue made it stand out. It was easy to follow and read. She incorporates the ‘name theme’ into the poem by combing a few valuable letters to short poems. The repetition helps it to flow. Krystine’s goal was to help the reader to spell her name correctly.

Krystle Duggins: Krystle chose to create an “All About Me” book. In the reflection summary, she states that the book told about how she got her name. It was in biography format and had an easy flow. I enjoyed the different backgrounds and text templates used to keep the story interesting.

Bailey Hunn: I believe this is one of my favorite peer makes because Bailey wrote about her cat. I myself love cats and always adopt from a shelter. I have had several blacks cats like Roku (Bailey’s cat) because I know they are harder to adopt. The book had an easy storyline to follow and gives information about what a shelter might be like.

Amanda Sanders: Amanda wrote “A Book About Me” as a biography. She used the repetition phrases which helped the book to flow and connect. The front cover was eye catching, making you want to read the book.

Author Bio: Megan Gatzka is currently an elementary school Librarian in Fresno, California where she resides with her husband of 17 years and two sons.  She is currently working on a Bachelors degree in Liberal Studies at CSU Chico and a Librarian certification at Fresno City College.  Her main focus is  to obtain a teaching credential as a Teacher Librarian.  

Rebecca Carney

The last two weeks have been filled with readings and a TED talk by John McWhorter. Speaking as one who has never used any of the programs/applications such as our Google + community and Storyjumper, I can honestly say I think we all deserve a pat on the back! There have been so many great posts that it makes me truly look forward to reading them all. We started our first week off by introducing ourselves and I know I cannot be the only one who saw a familiar face; it was great to read about everyone and their lives–so many relate to one another in various ways.

As for the assignments for week one, we were to discuss our own literacies and writings as well as read an article “Our Semi-Literate Youth? Not So Fast” that in a nutshell compared how we speak to how we write in a professional manner, a book “What Do You Do With An Idea?” which was about a little boy who was fighting the thought of having an idea and tried to keep it contained but when it came out he realized just how great it truly was, and finally, we watched a TED Talk from John McWhorter making his statement that texting is not killing language, rather it is making language grow and less complicated to get what we want to say out to whomever it may be.

My fellow peers had great responses for each article, book, and video: the first one to stick out to me was by Olivia Najera when she responded to the book reading, “I think once we get older the less willing we are to share our ideas. We may be afraid and think we will be made fun of, while children at times could care less what others think and share it all”- how true is this statement?! Most children, like mine, have no filters and just say whatever idea first pops in their head versus an adult who weighs many factors before blurting out your idea.

Week two, was hands down my favorite readings thus far. We read Chrysanthemum by Kevin Henkes that was about a female mouse and her uncommon and very long name going to school and quickly realizing the struggles that came with her name. Growing up, all she knew and heard was how great and beautiful her name was until some other female mice started teasing her at a constant rate. And, even though after each day of school she would go home and be reassured by her parents of just how beautiful her name was, it didn’t stick with her while being at school until a teacher complimented her name in front of her peers and disclosed her unusual name as well as saying how she was thinking of naming her unborn daughter “Chrysanthemum.” The second text we read was the poem “A girl named Jack” by Jacqueline Woodson. In this poem it discusses the process of just how she got her name at birth. My favorite line from this poem is “”Name a girl Jack, my father said, and she can’t help but grow up strong”- her father was already trying to make his daughter become a strong individual knowing the potential of bullying it may bring, she would only come out stronger in the end. Her mother disagreed so they compromised and went with Jacqueline. The third text was, “Second daughter’s second day” again, by Jacqueline Woodson: quite a powerful and moving poem. Jacqueline describes all of the injustice going on throughout the country against people of color and throwing in names and movements of power, as well as slipping in the unsurety of just how she might fit into the culture and whether or not she will be as strong as those she named. As I stated previously, these reading from week two have been my favorite! A peer of mine named Estefani Galarza wrote her response to “A girl named Jack” and the part in her response that caught my attention the most was when she stated, “He mentioned that she will grow strong because of her name. I feel like he makes it seem like she’ll be strong only because Jack is a male name, and they believe that men are stronger than women”- I guess I never looked at it that way, so interesting to see it in a different perspective!

Finally, our last assignment- OUR FIRST MAKE! Not going to lie, I was super overwhelmed with the thought of using Storyjumper for the first time; I felt as though it was going to be the most impossible thing ever! In all honesty, I had a great time using it and will definitely use it again. We were given an open option to create a poem or story on almost anything related to us. I chose to do a little story of a glimpse of a typical day for me with my family and their craziness.

There were so many great and creative stories and poems!

Sophia Bambino used Storyjumper to write out ABC’s of her life, how cool is this?! She had a great example for every letter. I loved reading through her book and seeing how much thought and effort she put into each one.

Another great Make that I truly enjoyed reading was from Kaylin Renfro– the way she wrote her poem from the words she chose to the format, it was all great and so intriguing.

There once was a little girl… 

There once was a little girl.
She was the apple of her father’s eye,
with tight blonde curls and bright blue eyes.
She came as a miracle,
the light at the end of a long dark road.

There once was a little girl.
She was the apple of her father’s eye,
with tight blonde curls and bright blue eyes.
She came as a bit of surprise,
full of spunk and fully in disguise.

You see this little girl,
she was not like her family.
Her tight blonde curls,
stood out among the red sea.

You see this little girl,
she was quite on her own time.
The youngest cousin by far
would be the only one in pink
asking for a ballerina bar.

She was the sunshine,
a bright blonde light.
The one who kept her mother up
late at night.

She was the sunshine,
a bright blonde light.
The one who became the little sister
who often started a fight.

She loved her family,
she loved them so.
She would give anything,
to watch them grow.

She loved her family,
she loved them so.
Her faith in God,
she would always know.

The poem that Marc Blair wrote on how he got his name was another great make. I loved how it was personal and that he wrote what his father thought and that his mother did not disagree. 

There once was a running back at USC,

He scored touchdowns, ran like the wind, and wore number 33.

The LA Coliseum would be in awe when he had the football

My dad would guarantee that year he would be the best player overall.

It was summer, of the year 1981

My parents would welcome the birth of their second son.

Thinking of names, my mothers early plan of having two boys named chad and brad had already faltered.

Their first boy was named Michael, her plan was quickly disordered.

My father demanded, “his name will be Marc and that is it”

“Why?” my mother asked, “I know its football season, and your feeling the USC Trojan Spirt…”

So there it was, I am named after running back Marcus Allen.

1981 was the year, the year he won the Heisman.

Really well written, Marc. Nice job everyone!

Author Bio: I am currently a stay at home mom, resigned from the Glenn County Office of Education after five years to pursue my schooling. I transferred from Butte College into my junior year at Chico State. I am currently working on my teaching credential and looking to pursue my special education credential in moderate/severe. I have two children, a boy and girl, as well as two dogs and a husband. In my spare time I love watching Dr. Phil, crafting, and doing DIY home projects inspired from Pinterest.

Grade Updates Sent

Grade Updates Sent

From my email to y’all:

Moments ago, you should have received an individual email with a grade update. You’ll get one of these every week or so and certainly at the end of a cycle. Some things to note:

  • I tend to give full credit for all work. So, if you have less than full points it means you either missed part of the prompt (easy to tell if you have 1/2 the points) or it’s really short and does not have enough depth (something like a 7/10 or 8/10). Look at the examples on our website (under Example Student Work page) to get a sense of expectations. Or look around at others on our G+ and notice that people write some long and gloriously thorough posts (thank you!). A couple of points will not hurt your overall grade and I would expect to see your posts get better and better, so no worries.
  • If you received a 15/20 on your Make, you simply missed the process part (telling us why you approached the make the way you did, your process, any issues, etc.). You can add that now if you want and I’ll update your grade. Just let me know when it’s added (email me). I have two examples of the process below from Krystina and Madison (thank you!) if you want some good examples of this part.
  • Note that at this moment, 5 points looks like it kills your grade, but it’s because it’s 40/45 total (so a B+). Total points for the class when we’re all done is 325. 320/325 is an A. Missing a couple of things will be okay, but more than that really starts to effect your grade. And missing a Make assignment is brutal…don’t miss those 20 points every 2 weeks. 😉
  • I really can’t take late work. Every time my classes blog or write posts I have 98 assignments to read…so 98 on Wednesdays and 98 on Sundays…close to 200 posts per week. I love love love reading these, so that’s not the issue, but keeping track of late ones or updates is just no fun. You’ll need to get things in on time. thank you!

Okay, that’s enough of the grade details for now. You are writing beautiful responses to the ideas in class so far. I am so grateful for the clearly hard work you put into your posts and your first makes!

Finally, one pro-tip: if you are getting a ton of G+ notifications, you can change the notification settings by clicking on the dots, then Preferences, then Community Notifications.

THANKS FOR CLICKING ON THE EMAIL LINK! We ended up with 26/34 people, so much better than our original 13!

Here’s the example process explanation for the makes:

From Madison:

I chose to write a poem about my middle name. I chose a poem since poems are usually my preference for expressing myself in writing. I prefer rhyming with light work, such as a poem about my name. If I’m writing something much deeper, I tend to not rhyme. It really depends on the tone of my poem, and how effective I feel rhyming will or will not be. Our names tend to define who we are, since there usually is meaning behind them. My middle name come from part of my dad’s name. Considering how close I am with my dad, I almost felt it was fitting to write about my middle name. My last name is important too, but I’m getting ready to get married, and my first and middle name are the two parts of my name that will not legally change in 4 months.

From Krystina:

For this week’s make, I decided to create a poem that incorporates the theme of names from our readings. Inspired by the theme of “name”, I opted to share some of my life and how my name has defined it (or how my life has defined my name!). Repetition is a great literary tool that, when used correctly, can teach the reader something new and leave more of an impact by emphasizing the author’s purpose. By repeating the same words and formatting from stanza to stanza, I hoped to create some rhythm. This rhythm and word selection should hopefully inspire the reader to understand the importance I place on spelling my name correctly as that was my goal with this poem.

Heading in to Week 3

Heading in to Week 3

Hello nice people of English 333!

Your makes are looking so so good! Thank you to so many of you who are trying out the Storyjumper site and some of you are writing such adorable poems; bravo. Friendly reminder that the makes are due tonight and remember to talk about the process when you share your make (who you decided to approach the assignment the way you did, what worked, what was challenging). Finally, make sure you are responding to at least one of your peers when you post. Thank you!

Make Cycle 2 is now up on the site; you can always find this under the Make Cycles tab. And link here. We’ll be looking more closely at storytelling and starting to read in our About the Authors book, which I think you’ll like a lot. The authors have so many amazing examples from kids. You have posts due Wednesday & Sunday, which will typically be the routine throughout the semester.

IMPORTANT: PLEASE READ—> I assigned people to the “Featured Curators” assignment for the semester. Please look for your name listed by a make cycle under the Featured Curators assignment. I am about to send an email to Marc, Krystina, Megan, Krystle, and Rebecca next hoping that you’ll be willing to go first! I’ll send further instructions in that email. Everyone should look over the assignment and watch for an email for me during your make cycle with more information. You can find lots of examples from last semester on our course website. Like this one. 

I’ll give more feedback tomorrow and Tuesday and plan to send your first grade update by Tuesday afternoon. I send grade updates to your Wildcat email and I’ll send everyone a head’s up that grades are sent so you can check your email.

Really grateful for the thinking you are doing already and the conversations you’re having with your peers.

This information was also sent to your email: please let me know that you’re reading the email updates by CLICKING HERETHANK YOU!

Welcome to English 333 fall 2018!

Welcome to English 333 fall 2018!

Hello everyone! I am so excited to write and work together this semester! Please check out our site and the various pages. I’ve created a welcome video (below) that I hope offers some insights into our course and how we’ll work together. I will update the weekly video each week(ish) on the main page.

One book to buy for our class: About the Authors: Writing Workshop with Our Youngest Writers by Katie Wood Ray and Lisa Cleaveland.

You should also check out:

  • The Syllabus page
  • The Make Cycles page, which also has drop down menus outlining the tasks for various weeks. I’ll update those “Make Cycles” every two weeks from that Make Cycles drop down menu. Make Cycle 1 is there now or HERE. Please notice that our first Intro post has two parts. And again, you can find the prompts and instructions under the Make Cycle 1 page.

Your first assignment is due by Wednesday night (Aug 29): post an introduction to our group in the G+ community. *Note: Instructions for joining the G+ Community can be found on the Make Cycle 1 page.

This intro has two+ parts: 1) your introduction to us and 2) some thoughts about your literacies, and 3) I hope you’ll consider adding a photo. Some things you could tell us: 

Part I:

  • Who are you and why are you here?
  • How did you end up at Chico State? What are your goals this semester and beyond?
  • What are your interests?
  • What are you curious about?

Part II

  • Think about your own literacies: what do you read and write? What purpose does writing serve in your life? What counts as writing? What about lists, social media, texting, emails, amazon reviews? In what ways do you use writing in your day to day life? How does this writing connect to writing you do for school?

Important: Once you’ve shared your post, respond to a peer, make connections to another human.

Post in our G+ Community. Look for the category called “Make Cycle One: Introductions” on the left hand side of our G+ page. Hoping you’ll share an image or even a video! Again, and always: Once you’ve shared your post, respond to a peer, make connections to another human.

Let me know if you have questions and I look forward to seeing you online!

Kim

Featured Curators Make Cycle 6: Janette, Dana, Rebecca, Veronica, Karen, Raenni, & Nancy

Featured Curators Make Cycle 6: Janette, Dana, Rebecca, Veronica, Karen, Raenni, & Nancy

Janette Herrera

Assessments, assessments, assessments, we hear so much about assessments! Before reading chapter 7 in Ray and Cleveland’s About the Authors: Writing Workshop with Our Youngest Writers, all I thought of when I thought about assessments were tests, more specifically state tests. After reading this chapter I think of so much more. My biggest take away from this chapter was the purpose of assessments. There are three main purposes shared throughout this chapter including: to direct our teaching, to help us work with parents who may not be familiar with the king of writing instruction their children are experiencing, and to help maintain a celebratory attitude about our teaching.  Looking at assessments for these reasons was mind-blowing to me; it makes perfect sense that these should be the focus of doing assessments in our classrooms, not to give grades, or to see how our students measure up on the state tests against other students. With focusing on these three goals for assessments the other things will naturally fall into place.

The next take away I got from this chapter was the way they did their assessments. There was no mention of writing tests, spelling tests, or grammar tests. There are three ways to assess students writing through a variety of observations. The first type discussed is to look at a piece of finished writing. Based on what you know about the student and what has been taught you can gauge what the students knows about writing and if they are using the different writing techniques that you would expect them to be using. The next form of assessment discussed, referred to as, “catching them in the act” is my favorite form of assessment. This really consists of being in the classroom as the kids work and paying attention to what they are working on, how they are working on it, and why. This is where you see things that you have taught clicking and happening. This is my favorite part of being in a classroom with the kids. The third form of assessment that this chapter touches on is looking at a child’s work throughout the course of a period of time. This is an important assessment because you can see the growth and development that has happened in the students writing.

Throughout this make-cycle we focused on creating a writing assignment using a mentor text of our choice for a partner to assess and complete for us. Although I had a difficult time getting started with this make-cycle it ended up being my favorite one from this semester. I enjoyed seeing what my partner came up with using my prompts along with getting her feedback on how she felt the delivery of my assignment went for her. Thanks Sandra Nyland, you did a great job! This make-cycle was also one of my favorites because I really had a good time looking at what all of my class-mates came up with.

One of my favorite makes from this cycle was done by Lisa Valdez and Chad Lafenhagen. Lisa used the mentor text, Tadpole’s Promise by Jeanne Willis, and asked Chad to create a story of two unlikely characters with a surprise ending as shown in the mentor text. She was clear about the instructions and gave a clear expectation of what she was looking for out of the assignment. He did a great job with his feedback and created an amazing book using storyjumper, which Lisa is actually planning to buy and use with this assignment in her future classroom. How cool is that!

The next make that really caught my eye during this make cycle was by Hannah Hughes. Originally it caught my eye because she gave a choice of focusing on the text or illustration to be the focus of the assignment for the student. I love this idea because it enforces the idea that books and writing is about more than just words and gives students who maybe thing they are not the best writers or maybe do not enjoy it as much as others an opportunity to approach writing in a way that hey may find more enjoyable. They may even find that by creating illustrations first it helps guide their writing. Hannah was partnered with Ruben Mendoza who did an awesome job creating an assignment to match what Hannah was looking for. He hit all the points that Hannah had asked for and made it personal and relative to life by incorporating his Instagram which I thought was brilliant!

Another writing assignment that I found interesting this week was created by Chelsea Paterson. I was first intrigued by her assignment because it taught me a new word, onomatopoeia, but then as I continued to watch her presentation could see this being used as a mini-lesson as described in our mentor text by Katie Wood Ray and Lisa B. Cleveland. Chelsea did a great job of outlining what to look for when reading the mentor text offered and gave guidelines for the assignment she wanted created. I thought the post reading discussion was great to include and could see this being very beneficial in the classroom when doing this lesson. Chelsea’s partner Rebecca Spears did a great job of creating a fun book using the guidelines within the assignment. I can see this assignment being used in a kinder or 1st grade classroom and it being a huge success.

All of this week’s makes were fun to assess. I was exposed to several authors that I was unfamiliar with and got to enjoy many books that I had never heard of before as well (one of my favorite parts about this class, is sharing these new books with my daughters). Everyone did a great job and I can see anyone of these being used in a classroom. It is great to see that everyone was supportive of one another and receptive to the feedback given by their partners. All of these assignments could be done in so many ways it will be fun to see what my future students come up with using some of these prompts and mentor texts down the road.

Author Bio: Janette Herrera is the mother of four children, ranging in age from 5 years old to 18 years old. She is currently a Director at a ski resort but has always dreamed of being an educator. A few years ago, she did not like some of the things she saw happening in her sons’ school system and with the support of her loving husband decided to start school with a goal of becoming educated in order make a change. She is currently a senior at CSU Chico. The next steps for her will be to enter a credential program as well as obtain a master’s degree. Janette plans to teach for several years before moving on to an administration role to try to make those needed changes that motivated her to follow her dream of pursuing a career in education.


Dana Curiel

The readings for this week were very interesting and many classmates made insightful posts about them. During this Make Cycle we learned about assessment and this may have very well been one of the most important chapters in the book. Chapter 7 made sure we, as future educators, gained knowledge and learned different ways we could help our students out. While I was reading this chapter I realized that there is a lot of observing that is involved. There is so much more than just to read something and move on. We have to assess the students’ writing abilities by checking their spelling, illustrations, the kinds of writing they use, and many other aspects as well. Sometimes we just need to take a step back and learn from our students. Jillian Pearson mentioned, “I honestly want to try out and borrow all the advice given and use it on my future students. I want to take the time and closely observe their writings, watch and listen to them throughout the process, ask them to articulate what exactly they’re doing, and look over each students’ work over time.” I really enjoyed how excited and motivated she was to try all of the ideas given with her future students. I relate to her because I feel just as excited to learn and grow from the readings and use these tips and tricks in the future. Rebecca Barragan pointed out, “As teachers we need to understand that not everyone is going to understand or get something right away sometimes it takes other students more time to process the information. We need to be patient and realize that if we seeing a child slowly improving then we are doing something right.” Patience is definitely key when it comes to our students succeeding. There were many good observations throughout our discussion!

The second part of our Make Cycle had to do with looking at common core standards. I have never been familiarized with these, so it was all pretty new to me. Looking at the standards and incorporating them into parts of Chapter 7 was interesting as well. Jennifer Barajas-Goodwin had a good example of how to incorporate her common core standard in the classroom, “Have your students use their animal, with their list of things they know about the animals and construct what they think a day in the life of that animal would entail.” This gets the students thinking and writing informational texts, but having fun with the assignment.

In the end, we had to create our “makes.” That meant we had to create our own writing activity for a partner and then they had to actually do the writing activity then reflect on the make. Although Sean was my partner for this I am choosing his as an example because I really enjoyed it and had fun with it. Sean made a really neat presentation for his activity and everything was well instructed. If you would like to check it out, here is the linkSean had me think about a few things before actually going through with the activity. I liked that he did that because it was almost as if he was intending to get me thinking right off the bat. A way to start getting ideas of what I could do for my writing activity. He also used an example which was very helpful and could be helpful for his future students as well.

Another make that sparked my interest was Karen Fawns. She started off with a few discussion questions as well, but her activity included writing a narrative with illustrations. Her partner could either write this in paragraph form or as a short story. I thought it was a really fun idea to include illustrations. Often times students get bored of just constantly writing, so letting them express their work in illustrations is always a great idea. Here is her activity

Lastly, Josue Java had a captivating make as well. I liked the fact that he was intending to use this activity to get his students prepared for standardized testing. His fourth grade students were to write a narrative and explain what they would do if they were president.  This gets their minds going and coming up with several ideas to use in their writing. Children have great little minds, so it would be a great experience to learn about everything they would do as president.

Overall, I enjoyed this make cycle. Learning about assessing our students and knowing when to take some time to step back and just observe is something I hope to use in the future. One thing I found extremely interesting was learning about common core standards. There are several standards and each grade level differentiates between standards. My favorite part was the make itself. Creating our own writing activity and looking over everyone else’s activities was so much fun. I won’t lie, it was kind of difficult to get started and think about a writing activity for my partner. I do wish I could have come up with something better, but for a first time, I feel confident about it and definitely learned from this experience.

Author Bio: I graduated from Yuba College in 2016 and pursued my dream to attend ASU. Moved back from Arizona and now attending Chico State and majoring in Liberal Studies. I would love to teach first grade or the elementary grade level in general. I also hope/plan to get my Master’s at ASU after completing my Bachelor’s here at Chico. I am excited to be completing my first semester here at Chico and hope to catch many Giants games this summer!


Rebecca Spears

Make Cycle 6 was definitely a fun one! We were able to explore the processes of creating effective writing assignments. In this make cycle, we were partnered up with our classmates and assigned to make a writing activity/lesson for our partner to try out while we tried our partner’s activity out. Going into this assignment, I didn’t think that I was going to have as much fun as I did and learn as much from the work of others than I did. One of the makes that really stood out to me was the writing activity and reflection written by Kellie Cabico. She based her writing activity for her partner on the mentor text called, How this Book was Made by Mac Barnett and Adam Rex. I enjoyed the book that Kellie chose because of the creativity and purpose behind it and how much we can relate it to our own writing. I also really like how Kellie’s activity turned out, “Write something that explains how you go about making your books.  You can use expository, narrative, or opinion types of writing.  It be a poem, comic, song, or a story like we just listened to by Mac Barnett.  Show us how you do what you do the way you like to do it. Have fun!” Kellie’s reflection opened my eyes to the many possibilities of ways our students can surprise us teachers. In her reflection, I also really liked how Kellie pointed out that actually being the teacher is much different than being in the shoes of the student always. I really like how personal Kellie makes this assignment because I know that children love to create their own personal stories about themselves. Nicely done Kellie! Link to Kellie’s Writing Activity

Another writing activity and reflection that stood out to me was one by our classmate, Hannah Hughes! She chose to create her writing assignment on the mentor text by Brendan Wenzel titled, They All Saw A Cat. This text was a great example of how the use of illustrations can influence the storyline. This writing activity stood out to me because it focused so much on rhythm and perspective. In life, everyone does not see the same thing all of the time because we all are unique with our own perspectives. I think this is an important ideal for children to learn because many children thing there is only one way of doing things whether it be in art or writing, when really, there are many ways of doing things because each of us is an individual who can choose to write or even draw let’s say a cat however they want. Hannah describes her activity when she states, “Focus on ways you can show perspective as your creature ventures along in it’s story. You may use illustrations to convey perspective (like the author), or use a dialogued descriptions of actions, thoughts, and feelings to develop experiences and events, or show  responses of characters to meeting your creature.” I really like how Hannah brings in the illustrations as part of her activity and how she provides a good example for her students to branch off of as they so please. In Hannah’s reflection, I like how she first thanks her student Ruben and how she gives him good feedback. Stepping into the teacher shoes isn’t always easy, but Hannah proves that she knows what she is doing! Overall, Hannah’s writing activity and her reflection express the true meaning of teaching and how perspectives can alter the way that someone might view something in writing like shown in her mentor text. Great job Hannah! Link to Hannah’s Writing Activity

Finally, the writing activity and reflection that Samone Burge shared with our class definitely stood out to me! First of all, Samone chose to create her writing activity off of the text There was an Old Lady who Swallowed a Fly by Simms Taback, which is actually the mentor text that I chose, so I can relate more to this assignment than any other. Samone starts off by explaining what a cumulative tale is, which is important for the reader so that they can understand the activity more clearly. In Samone’s actual assignment, she tells her students to “create your own cumulative tale using There was an Old Lady who Swallowed a Fly as your mentor text.” I like this method of a writing assignment because after reading the book, students can’t help but already create a story with themselves in the actual story with the old lady. Therefore, this is a great way to get the creative juices of students flowing! Samone did a great job interpreting the common core standards of second grade into her writing activity because one of her standards is to have the students write in relation to a mentor text. Furthermore, I enjoyed reading Samone’s reflection. I like how she pointed out the struggles of actually starting this activity since we are so used to being in the student’s shoes at this point in the semester. Also, I noticed that she even included her process as she described, “Once I got the bones of the lesson plan in place, the biggest challenge for me was deciding how to assess the lesson after it was taught. In fact I was so troubled by creating the assessment, I saved it for last and almost forgot to complete the assessment portion of the lesson altogether.” In the end, I really learned a lot from Samone’s writing assignment and all of the details that go into writing an assignment like this one. Awesome job Samone! Link to Samone’s Writing Activity

This make cycle 6 has definitely been interesting these past two weeks. As a class, we put on our teaching helmets and we practiced creating writing assignments for our peers. It has been interesting since most of us are so used to being comfortable in the student perspective, so it was a little bit more difficult to step into the shoes of the teacher. However, as you can tell from the work of my classmates, we are no joke when it comes to creating our writing assignments, so I believe that we have nothing to worry about when it comes to teaching and creating writing assignments. There are so many lessons that we learned from this make cycle, and some of them include: we need to be able to be ready to come up with good writing assignments/plans for our students, we need to be open to diverse learners in our classroom, and we need to make sure that our students see the positive attributes of writing. Overall, this make cycle and rather this class has improved my knowledge completely on the topics of creating effective writing assignments and in general, teaching students.

Author Bio: I am currently studying at Chico State and hope to be a teacher. Some of my interests include: sports, cleaning (lol), eating, spending time with my family, going to the snow, and working out. I am very curious about astronomy. I love star gazing and thinking about what is out there in the mysterious sky. Also, I am very curious about the past. I love finding out what happen many years ago or even just what happened in the fifties.


Veronica Oregel

As we are nearing our the last month of the Spring 2018 semester, I realized how this course has helped me overcome my fear of teaching writing. I wasn’t sure of myself at first because I am not the best writer, but I quickly learned how to subside my fear and to not be afraid to write. Learning to write, and write well, is a crucial life skill. Not only does it help one succeed in school, its vital to success in the “real” world too. I also believe that writing helps student achieve more in education.

I think chapter 7 was a fun chapter to learn. By the end of the chapter, I now believe that teaching should be assessed by observing the success of the learners. This means seeing how much students participate in projects and how much above and beyond the scope of assignments do students go in order to learn on their own. This is where the educator can ignite the students passion for the subject. This was an “aha” moment for me as a future teacher.

Chapter seven reminded us to look and see how much students participate. The authors recommend assessment techniques versus standardize tests: looking closely at individual pieces of writing, watching and listening as children are engaged in the process, asking children to be articulate, and looking across the work of a single child over time.

“In addition to this, catching children in the act of trying things on their own is our only true way of knowing whether they are getting it – the it being all the writing curriculum we are offering up as possibilities in our teaching” (120).

I love the idea of using activities during learning as a form of quality check. The teacher uses the activities and processes in class to make a determination on a students growth and progress. I prefer to use About The Authors assessment techniques versus a standard test which would be given after the lesson to judge a students progress and then assign a grade. Honestly, I never knew teachers could do this.

Last week we were partnered up with a classmate and had to create a writing assignment for our partner based on a book our choice. The assignment had to reflect on one or more of the Common Core Standards. I am not going to lie, I was nervous. I believe we are our own worst critiques because we worry too much about what other people will think about us and our work. Overall I think the class did an amazing job with the project.

Jennifer Barajas-Goodwin said: “I really enjoyed doing this make cycle. I think its my most favorite one by far. It made me feel like I was a teacher already where I was putting together lesson plans for my students to be doing.”

Sandra Nyland mentioned, “this activity was so enjoyable and confidence building! Also, one idea that was reinforced for me was that it is important to continue to build a resource library of texts.”

The majority of the class enjoyed the assignment and had fun with it. Some of us had different results than they expected but I believe overall this was good practice.

At the end of Make 6, the readings, creating the activity based on a children’s book, doing the partners activity and reflecting on it, I realized that having the students doing the work is more effective than having them listening. But not doing rote things or busy work. Actual doing. Let them know what they are doing and why it matters. How does it effect their learning and their goals to do this thing you have. Writing can be difficult for some because it is not as active as Math or Science, but we use writing as a tool to organize our thoughts.

My classmates Kellie Cabico and Julie Lafreniere definitely had the most fun with this assignment and were the team that interacted the most. Kellie designed her assignment from How This Book Was Made by Marc Barnett and gave Julie very good directions and explanations of the book and the purpose of her assignment. Julie on the other hand did not give Kellie as much instructions and she was worried that she did not give enough direction on the assignment. However in the end, both of them were able to get creative and deliver. I chose them because while one person decided to go above and beyond on her lesson plan, the other person did not give as good directions as the other. No it wasn’t perfect, but it worked! Julie made an awesome video where she shared her wisdom and explained how important it is to reassess our lessons plans.

Kellie Cabico mentioned, “I was initially a little apprehensive about this assignment.  It’s one thing to be completely enamored of how another teacher, our authors and our teacher, plans, formats and teaches a curriculum that your also completely besotted with.  It’s completely another thing to try it yourself and put it out there for one of your peers to do. But I have to say, that once I started rolling on it, it felt good. I loved the choices for mentor authors, I loved who I was partnered with and I am really proud of what we accomplished together.”

Julie Lafreniere said, “my focus on explaining what I wanted from her, was a video that did NOT HAVE MUCH DIRECTION.  The words I used should have been purposeful. I will say videotaping an assignment can be a good way of evaluating the lesson delivered and see what you are missing.”  “My biggest hurdle is separating the love of teaching students to learn, with the idea of my own hate towards personal learning (when I just don’t “get it”). I mean why would anyone teach and watch others constantly cope with the same struggles.  People don’t usually do that. Right?”

Author Bio: My name is Veronica Oregel. I am the first generation in my family to go to college and I am the oldest of three. I have been married for three years and have a one year old German Sheppard. I knew I wanted to be teacher when I was nine years old and used to teach my little brother how to read. On my free time I enjoy hiking, running with the dog, or getting pedicures.


Karen Fawns

Chapter 7 is a great chapter to round out the reasoning on why and how the Writing Workshop Works.  In this chapter, it discusses how the assessment process works in the Writing Workshop. Now this assessment, to me, is like no other, it is a continuous walk around, assessing and conferring with individuals students while they are working.  According to Wood Ray and Cleaveland:

“to assess the writing work of young children, we’ve got to be right out there in the messy, real, wonderful middle of all their work” (119).

They discuss that there is no checklist that should be used because each child is different and touches upon different techniques.  I do think this is where I would need to walk around with a clipboard that has reminders of techniques to look, and blank paper to jot down specific notes.  Notes could be things to talk about in the one on one conferences, like mechanics, notes to remind me fabulous things for share time, and new techniques that I see students trying out. There are four main forms of assessment: looking closely at individual pieces of writing, watching and listening to children working on pieces, asking children to be articulate, and looking at the history of a students writing.

When assessing it is a great reminder to remember what is developmentally appropriate for the student, what growth have you seen from the student, and what techniques have they used that you have reviewed or not.  When having little conferences it is always good to start them off with a question of what they are doing and why they are doing it. This can help them to articulate what it is that they are trying and give you some insight into what they are thinking. It is going to remind students of little inconsistencies that you have noticed from them so they can correct it.  It is also good to show praise for the great things you have seen the students try or touched upon. It is good when assessing while walking around and seeing the process first hand because it helps you understand some techniques you need to remind them of our work on. The history of a student’s writing is key to understand the growth of that child and all of the strategies or techniques that they have worked on.

When assessing it is key to try and keep track of all the little notes taken on the students.  This will help to show to the parents, other teachers, and for report card purposes the evidence of what they have learned and the individual student’s growth base and knowledge.  This will also help you as a teacher know what you need to teach in depth more or what you nailed because of the evidence is shown in their work. “Assessment can make the teaching that happens during share time each day much richer as well” (137).  I would hope to plan out a Writing Workshop right before a recess so I can let the kids out and then get down all of my assessment thoughts down on paper before switching to a new subject.

We also read Appendix G that talks about creating peer conferences with the students to help benefit each other is and should be seen as a positive thing.  This could be one of the mini-lessons within a unit to help the students understand it. Show the students examples of what this might look like and then ask what they learned from it.  This will create for a chatty writing workshop, but those are where the ideas begin and never end.

We were asked to pick a grade level from the list of Common Core Standards and review that grades standards. As I went through looking at all of our Common Core Standards I seemed to notice a theme so I did the math and here’s the facts.  Out of 30 students who did the C.C.S. activity 20 students picked reviewing first or second grade standards, while only 6 students picked fourth thru sixth grade.

For our Make Cycle 6 we were put into pairs and asked to create a writing activity based on specific grade level of our choice and how it targets the Common Core Standards for that grade level. We were provided a list of mentor texts to base our writing activity on, so there would be no problem finding one.  

Rayn Buford’s 3rd grade writing activity for her partner Salina is a creative concept that involves creating an invention and persuading everyone to buy it.

Lisa Valdez’s writing activity for 2nd graders is to choose two different characters (living or non-living)  and use the natural course of their “life” to make a story in which they meet and make friends with each other. Her partner Chad Lafenhagen created a surprising and California relevant book.

Shelby Baccala has a very creative writing assignment that I did not expect: you are to think of your least favorite fairy tale and then write a different ending that adds elements to the story that you like. Her partner Samone Burge had a great spin on the Sleeping Beauty fairy tale that any mother can relate to.

Author Bio: Hello all, my name is Karen Fawns and I am a Senior at Chico State.  I took about a decade off from college, created a family of four, and now I am back to the grind.  I am a concurrent major in Multiple Subject and Education Specialist Level 1. I have been working at a local high school as a Special Education Paraprofessional for twelve years and an Elementary After School Program for fifteen. I am excited to be back in college and cannot wait to work with students in a little different capacity than now.  


Raenni Pilgrim

I feel this Make went well and really let the creators express how they believe standards should be taught. In this make we needed to create an activity tied to a book that will fulfill the core standards for elementary.

In previous makes we were required to flex our creative idea muscles and follow the standards laid out by the teacher, examples being writing stories or creating poems. This make was different because we were not just creating a make, someone else had to actually do the activity that was created. This intensified the necessity to write clearly and have a well thought out process.

One example of our work is Salina’s assignment: “For your Writing assignment I want you to try and create a short story, like Mo Willems.  Try to make fun cartoons, and bubble style writing to make the book relatable for a young students.  Have fun with this writing, it does not need to be hard, rather enjoyable!”

 Her assignment was coupled with a book about a pigeon wanting a puppy. The book was enjoyable and had a fun twist because it was read by a child. The standard 1.1 that is referenced is meant for a first grade class and in my experience they tend to need a lot of direction when given writing assignments. The book is great for the grade level and the activity has a strong basis.

Another example is Ryan’s assignment: “Related Activity: Buy Me! Think of an invention. It could be a pencil with wheels? Or a hat that squirts water? When you have a final idea, begin to draw your invention. On a blank sheet of paper color your invention. Then, on a blank piece of binder paper write down why we should buy it. Make sure to introduce your invention, describe the invention with as much detail as you can, explain exactly how it works, a problem it could potentially solve, and a conclusion. This is your chance to persuade everyone to buy your invention!”

In this make the directions are very clear and several standards are used and learned in the process of this piece. The format is creative and easy to follow. The book is fun and age appropriate for the third grade classroom.  The goal of the assignment is to create a persuasive writing piece and the book chosen is about a child trying to get a new pet. Ryan underlines the main ideas in the topic and what is expected of the students.

The most important takeaway from this week was learning what the standards are and seeing what creative ways you could teach them. The creators got to take their assignments for a test run and allow other students to attempt the activity. The majority of people received positive feedback, but some found constructive criticism and let themselves grow from it. Salina says in her reflection: “If I were to change something I would take Rayn’s advice on narrowing down the subject being that this project would be done early on in the year and a sense of direction might be more comforting for a younger group.” Even though her activity was not perfect she allowed herself to learn from what she had done. That is the purpose of this make, to learn from what we do and receive feedback from our fellow teachers in training. We are in this class to expand our knowledge of teaching and to better understand the common mistakes that can be made and how to avoid them. We now have to think about why we are assigning writing projects and what do we really want students to learn. We also need to think about what are different ways to get students to learn each standard, and how to modify lessons to fit each individual students learning abilities and styles.

Author Bio: I am currently enrolled in the online bachelor program at CSU Chico because I wanted to get my Bachelor degree while still working with children. My mother is a preschool teacher so I have been around children my whole life and this is what sparked my passion to teach. I want to inspire students to love learning by using new and creative teaching techniques that they can connect to.


Nancy Diezmo

Make 6 had several great projects, and in my opinion, one of the makes that most reflected our experience as teachers since we came up with a large picture idea for a lesson plan including all the necessary details. This make exposed us to researching our state standards for our preferred grade level, which will be important to become accustomed to doing and this make also held us accountable towards our partner for peer reviewing/opinions just as our students will and even our colleagues!

Kellie Cabico’s use of How Do You Make Books? was superb! The presentation of how to execute the activity as well as the mentor text she connected to the assignment was a great presentation of the literal process of writing. My take away from Kellie would be the organized format, read aloud book, and great assessment tools (even an ‘just for fun’ extra video!)

Erin Russo’s make about The Red Book touched me because I work in special education and see how sometimes a book with illustrations is just as powerful for many students! I really appreciated that Erin highlighted ways for writers to emerge in communication without words so this activity appeals in many inclusive ways. Additionally, I loved that this activity encourages the creative aspect students have, by promoting illustrations. I liked the options of adding words to retell or making a parallel concept story.

Rayn Buford’s Make was amazing! I have a small bias because I truly enjoyed Karen Kaufman Orloff’s book I Wanna Iguana 😊 the idea of writing various avenues for that book plus having students make their own arguments to convince an audience to “buy” the idea was really fun! This Make embodied grasping the mentor text, great writing prompts as well as creative activity for our future students!

Author Bio: I graduate this spring as part of Liberal Studies (online) program, have worked in both special and general education for several years and hope to continue to do so! Looking forward to hikes with my rescue doggie, leisure reading and cooking this summer.

Featured Bloggers Make Cycle 5: Lisa, Maritza, Yorleidi, Caitlin, Josue, Jamie, & Salina

Featured Bloggers Make Cycle 5: Lisa, Maritza, Yorleidi, Caitlin, Josue, Jamie, & Salina

Lisa Valdez

This week was packed with so much information, yet most of it was extremely valuable for us, as future teachers. In Chapter 6 of About the Authors, many of us expressed how overwhelming the concept of lesson planning seems, as we haven’t had much experience with it. I appreciated the idea of breaking down the lessons into “mini-lessons” where we fine-tune student’s work in depth. One idea for successful lesson planning was shared by Adriana Cea, who described the method used by a teacher she knew who did not mind lesson planning as much as the other teachers. The reason for her lack of stress? She stayed organized, and stored her most successful lesson plans each year in a filing cabinet where they were easily accessed for modification to fit new standards. This is a great tip for future teachers to keep in mind, right from the start. I also think that notes kept on how to improve the not so successful plans would help avoid similar pitfalls, especially since they could be made while the “lessons learned” for the teachers were still fresh in their minds. Taking a model from this chapter, working on improving our lesson planning in “mini-lessons” throughout the year could help teachers with the overall process planning as well.

In Chapter 6, I noticed that many of us, myself included, were impressed by the way Forrest was able to change his skepticism about his ability to write poetry into a new passion – a way for him, as a “lover of facts and information” to share his amazing observations and vivid descriptions of the birds it was obvious that he had spent some time watching in nature. What a change from his NBA poem the year before! This perfectly illustrated one of the major points of this chapter – that students incorporate and build upon the units of study for long afterwards. Brianna Carlucci’s meme perfectly captured this point from the chapter, specifically, a unit of study is never really over; we need to push through with projects sometimes, even when we think we aren’t capable of them. Her meme also captured Forrest’s reluctance to write poetry, even though he apparently learned to enjoy it, and turned out to be very good at it.

From Appendix F, I liked the concept of helping students to find ways to illustrate and capture something — an image, a feeling — from their writing, and let the reader feel that through their work. I really like the idea of small-group study of illustration techniques in the mentor texts, as others often view things differently than we do, and can point out things we might have missed. Many of us were inspired by the idea of reading a picture book without showing students the illustrations, and many different approaches took root from this suggestion. Veronica Oregel’s idea to “apply this in a mini lesson to get children to understand the meaning of words. We can show them how crucial specific words can change a meaning of a story” was somewhat different than the one that came to mind for me, but is just so true. I could see her approach prompting discussions about different results and how the illustrations might change along with the words. Rayn Buford had another good point: “I would want my activities throughout the week to be revolved around how there can be a story happening in pictures that isn’t necessarily happening in the words.” This is another great way to study a picture book that had not occurred to me – studying the pictures to “guess” the story without the words.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading Jane Gilrain’s article, “From Home to Hip-Hop: Teaching Writing Through Painting, Performance, and Poetry.” I especially love how the progress of the children, and the effect of the artwork and expression on their work was illustrated through side-by-side comparisons, allowing us to see for ourselves the impact the teaching method has had on the children. They were free to express themselves, including making their monsters female in order to empower girls, if they chose, or to let hidden feelings out. Especially touching to me were the stories of Miguel, separated from and longing for his father in Puerto Rico, and the little girl from the Emotional Support Unit whose father had died a year prior and who had never spoken about it, even to her mother. Her poem “Journey” and the results of her pre-and post-program evaluations speak volumes. She has found a safe and therapeutic outlet in which to express her pent-up grief. Kelly Cabico perfectly describes my feelings in reading this article: “This article hit me right in my ooey gooey heart. Seriously, I was teary eyed from about the halfway point through to the very end. I love that these children were learning about writing in a unique and dynamic way, but I loved most that they were connecting with their work in a way that was therapeutic; that it gave them characters to identify with and helped them outwardly process things they hadn’t been able to prior. That’s some powerful stuff!” Very powerful stuff, indeed.

I was also especially impressed with the “Allegory of the Troubled Kingdom,” as the children’s reactions to the visiting artist reminded me of the reactions of the students to writing workshop in Lisa’s classroom in our professional book. When they are encouraged to get out of their plastic seats and move around the classroom, their learning truly begins, and like the students in this article, they also begin writing. Sean Gamer had a very good take on why we should get these kids out of their desks: “A teacher can have outdoor classes for part of the day and let students do painting and reading outside. The significance behind the way I think this way is that every time a student walks by the spot they painted a picture of a flower or some outdoor project they will remember why they were outside instead of being cooped up in the classroom.” Along these lines as well, Caitlin M’s Yoda Meme made me laugh, as I found myself reading it in his voice! It also accurately captured the feeling of what happens in writing workshop, as well as when using multi-modal methods as described in Gilrain’s article.

There were so many great makes this week, I wish that I could highlight each and every one of them. It was so hard to only choose a few, but I will definitely be taking some notes from the great ideas this week for use in my future classroom. Some of the more memorable makes this week for me included Shelby Baccala’s professional website, which was very well done. I love that she highlighted not only her experiences in English 333, but also her volunteer work, and her teaching philosophy, which I absolutely agree with: “The best teachers are those who show you where to look, but don’t tell you what to see.”

Some of the makes this week revisited mentor texts or projects that we had done before, and I loved Christina Barbaccia’s Storyjumper book, “The Bronson Collection.” In this amazing little book, she has captured not only sweet images of her gorgeous furbaby that capture just how much he is loved, but I can also see the inspiration from some of our other makes in there, especially the pages in which Bronson is advertising his “Yellow Lab Security Co.” and the comparison between his thoughts on dinnertime, and the human perspective, which reflect Make 4’s compelling arguments. I can also see the influence from Make Cycle 2 in the recipe for “Bronson Blondies.”  Great job!

This week had so many new skills to practice, and stretched my tech brain, but I really enjoyed learning to make memes, and I was inspired to start a personal webpage for my make, something that I have long planned on doing but never got around to doing. While the page I have managed to create so far is far from what I have envisioned, it can only improve as my sorely-lacking web publishing skills improve. It is a start, and for that I am grateful!

Author Bio: My name is Lisa Valdez, and I am a junior at CSU Chico, having transferred from Santa Rosa Junior College with an AA Transfer degree in History. I am an RN, but am no longer able to work due to an injury, and now have the opportunity to work toward the teaching career that I discovered I loved doing while developing school health programs through the hospital’s wellness center. I am pursuing a double major in Liberal Arts and Social Sciences and plan on obtaining a teaching credential with the goal of being able to teach in whichever school needs me in my small rural area. I live with my husband Joe in McArthur, California, and have a farm where we raise Scottish Highland Cattle, dairy goats, pigs, and poultry, who are guarded by our very large Spanish Mastiffs. I do volunteer work for local veteran’s organizations, as well as working with several animal rescue groups, as well as cat rescue and livestock rescue during the local wildfires. My hobbies include knitting and yarn-crafts, dying fabric and yarn, and making homemade cheese and preserves from our farm products. I am a grandmother of four, three boys and a girl, ages 4 months to 9 years, and enjoy spending time with them and taking trips to Tahoe and Disneyland with them as often as I can. They are remarkably tech-savvy and we face-time frequently. We also send snapchat videos to each other — the babies really love the cute filters on snapchat! The profile picture above is my husband and I on my 50th birthday, cutting up for the camera and having fun at the Dungeons of San Francisco, such a fun outing!


Maritza Caceres

Welcome to Make Cycle 5.

Rebecca Spears’ Meme

On week one of this make cycle, the class read Chapter Six from About the Authors by Katie Wood Ray and Lisa Cleaveland. We had to write our take from the chapter. My take in Chapter Six was that behind the mini lessons there are big concepts, which are units of study. Those concepts are based on the process and product studies of writing a story. The process studies are the way the author creates the book such as revision and editing. While product studies are the traits found in the book such as the genre of the book. In the unit study, the teacher is able to go into detail to explain the concepts. There are various ways to determine the concepts to teach kids about writing. For example, the teacher can use the state and local curriculum. They can focus on the basic punctuation, capitalization, spelling and complete sentences. It can be part of the process studies. Also, teachers can envision the kind of writer they want their student to become in the future. The second part of the assignment was to create memes based on ideas from the textbook. We used imgflip site to create the memes. Memes are a widely used in today’s society. It is a modern style to use writing. The class did an amazing job coming up with unique and funny memes.

On week two of this cycle, the class read the article “From Homer to Hip-Hop: Teaching Writing through Painting, Performance, and Poetry”; we had to write our take on the article as well. My take on the article, by Jane Gilrain, used multimodal composing to tell her class’s writing experience with art. She begins with a letter that lets reader know what to expect of the article. She explains that she would be giving examples of her student’s work with art, poetry, and drama. Then she writes a poem for the reader to join her in the journey she experienced with her students through art. Gilrain mentions that she obtains the idea of the letter format from Billy Collins and the poem from Robert Frost. Afterwards, Gilrain created a fairy tale story about the situation that made the project possible to occur in her classroom. When I finished reading the three multimodal approaches of Gilrain, I thought about the information I learned in About the Authors. Gilrain is reading like a writer. She found writing mentors to create her article. She uses different writing formats to intrigue readers. After Gilrain introduces the topic in three different ways, she moves on by giving examples of her student’s work. For example, there is photography of Miguel acting as the son of Odysseus. He is performing the vocabulary word yearn. Overall the class did well in conveying their thoughts about the article and having discussions with classmates. Students uplift each other through our chats.

Below are Salina Rodriguez and Jillian’s comments on Jamie Xayachack article reflection:

Salina Rodriguez commented, “Jamie, I really enjoyed your reflection of the article. By realizing that as teachers we can refrain from the stuff structure that has been implemented for so long is a hopeful way to look into our future. I have always had a sense of worry in knowing that my classroom will be one that makes positive impacts on students not realizing how many ways I can make learning more hands on. I love that you mention that art is what shapes the world around us, even a student who does not thing they are good at drawing can find relaxation in painting or expressing their thoughts in a way other than writing. I have always heard that teachers learn from their students and I think this is where I will be learning from my students, for ways to present curriculum that students will enjoy. Great post!”

Jillian Pearson stated, “Hi Jamie, great reflection! I truly think that by implementing art, performance and poetry it really does open students up to the opportunity to make connections with the material being taught as well as with their peers. Students can have a better chance of expressing themselves or showing their knowledge if they’re given a more of a variety to do so.”

On Sunday, students posted their creations. We used multimodal texts for our projects and showed the skills we’ve learned in class. There were many awesome creations.

Let’s start with the first book “Guide to Picking the Right One” by Grace Pablos. The book was about selecting the right family member for certain activities. She would ask a question about a certain situation that only one of her family members could help her. Under the question, she had a picture of the family member that was perfect for that job. On the following page, she gave the name of the person and reason they were right for that job and she had a list of their qualities. I could tell that she took a lot of time creating her book. She wrote the book pages with black pen. While for the title, she used markers. The title page is colorful with different colors of flowers with a yellow sun and blue clouds. Also, she used sky blue and pink construction paper and envelopes for the pages. Grace did a great job incorporating multimodal composing in her book.  

The second book is “Marathon Motivation Book” by Emily Sall. The book inspires pace runners to run a marathon. In the book there are six note cards with stages of running a marathon: the stages are start, mile 6, mile 13, mile 19, mile 23, and mile 26.2. When the runner completes the mile listed in the book, they read the note card to encourage them to keep running. Also, the notecard includes tips to remember during the race. At the end of the book, it includes pages with topics that the runner can write about their experiences. The pages of the book are note cards and they are glued to purple, blue, or orange construction paper. The reader can take out the note cards from the book because they are inside envelopes. The notes cards writing and title are written on with a black pen. It is a neat way to read a book with note cards.

Lastly, I found interesting the book “Having A Little Sister” by Cyrill Somera. In her book, she describes some flaws of having a younger sister. At the end of the day those problems don’t matter: she will forever have a friend. She uses moving memes that go along with the topic she is writing about in her book. The title page has a green stripe going through her name and it seems she used the same font for all the pages. 

Great makes all around.

Author Bio: My name is Maritza Caceres. I am the sixth out eight children. When I had graduated from high school, I didn’t know what I wanted to major in school. My family encouraged me to continue my education. Therefore, I attended a community college. While I was attending community college, I got a job as a tutor. After I graduated college, I knew I wanted to become a teacher. Now I am attending CSUChico and my goal is to become a teacher.


Yorleidi Langarica 

Make Cycle 5 has certainly been a very interesting one and a hard one in my opinion. Over the past 2 weeks we have focused on trying to understand multimodal texts because we have to start getting ready as future teachers. We have to be able to know how to do them and in what type of environment we can use them. I think that it is a great tool to use in the classroom especially for students who are visual learners. The first discussion was about chapter 6 and appendix F; the best part about this assignment was creating my own meme about study units. This chapter really made me think and appreciate the work teachers must put in for their students. I think that the smaller the grade level the more time it takes to learn something new, which means more mini lessons to be planned! Yay. One thing that really caught my attention was when the author wrote: “If they are not organized over time under an umbrella of a bigger topic of interest to people who write, the our whole-class teaching can have a very hit and miss- feel to it.”  This, without question, is something every teacher must have in mind because we can teach, but will the students learn? Will they remember it later? We need to teach with a purpose, which is getting our students excited over learning new material that they’ll remember late on in life.

By Tuesday April 3, we read an article from Language Arts called “ From Homer to Hip-Hop: Teaching Writing Through Painting, Performance and poetry.” This article was all about multimodal composing; it used different types and explained them although some were confusing. It didn’t focus on one thing at a time. I had to read it a couple of times to understand what was going on especially in the beginning. I think that the part that got to me the most was about the little girl and how much she missed her father. It was as if I could feel her pain through her words. This was and will be a hard moment in her life but art did save her. She found a way to express her emotions without speaking a word of it. She expressed it with art. This is what art is all about, seeing and believing what nobody else does. Being creative and expressing what we feel in another way.

We then turned in our final make for this cycle. We had to use examples of multimodal texts to discuss or show our progress and understanding. This make was about showing our skills and how well we understand what multimodal is and how useful they can be. Here are some of my peers best work:

Book titled 'The Bronson Collection'
By Christina Barbaccia

I really liked this make because she used her dog as an example of multimodal text. Her text were very well represented and funny. She used last weeks reading of Language Arts as inspiration as you can see by the variety of text like art and poetry. My favorite part was the Bronson Blondies recipe because she had to use “only 1 teaspoon of ferociousness.”

I also really liked Emily Sall’s make (see above) because you could tell she had fun making it and it was a form of inspiration towards others. I feel like this make was more based of the article we read because the text in this case the book which made her feel better, it motivated her. My favorite thing about this make is that she actually created it by herself and showed us the creativity and passion she possess.

What caught my attention in Madison Honegger’s make was the fact that it was based of the mentor texts “always a bridesmaid” and “ The Story of Every Mom’s Typical Day.” What I really liked about it was that it could relate to anyone living in a dorm. It is the funny things in life that you remember the most. The best meme was when the fire alarm went off because it is hilarious that this situation could happen just because someone forgot to add water to their noodles.

Author Bio: I am 20 years old and it is my second year at Chico State. I was born in Jalisco, Mexico but moved to California when I was 7. I currently live in Corning, CA with my family. I have 3 brothers and am the only girl. I want to become a 2nd grade teacher.


 

Caitlin Micko

When reflecting on Make Cycle 5, the creation of those memes to go along with our textbook reading assignments were daunting to me. I am not going to lie, the thought of a meme puzzled me to no end! However, when I thought about what a meme can tell as a way of expression, it made the process a bit easier. By the conclusion of the assignment, I ended up loving the meme I made! I think memes are something I want to even incorporate in my future classroom.

I thought the overall theme of my meme ended up making much more sense than I thought I would have the ability to make. I am also pleased with my meme because it expresses an idea from About the Authors that has really stuck with me throughout this course. In About the Authors, Wood Ray and Cleaveland discuss how students learn by “making stuff” (Ray and Cleaveland, 6). I couldn’t express how much I agree with Ray and Cleaveland! I teach by the philosophy that students learn by creating and getting their hands dirty. So, the ideas in About the Authors resonates with me.

Throughout this course, About the Authors has inspired and challenged me about teaching. I love that it is about writing workshops and related topics, but many of the lessons and tips can be applied to teaching in general. I am so pleased that I bought this book (I usually rent textbooks) because I want to keep it as a reference guide and as inspiration for my entire teaching career. For this Cycle, the idea on page 108, where Ray and Cleaveland write, “We find the guidance to make this decision each year in a number of different places: Our vision for how we want students to be as writers at the end of the year….” I think this is an extremely important idea and an inspirational quote. I think it is logical, smart, and brilliant to think about where you want your students to be at the end of the year when lesson planning. I often think, ‘Is this lesson fulfilling a development need for my students and is it preparing them for x, y, and z in Kindergarten?” However, when getting lost in preparing a whole unit, I think the idea of asking oneself if it is setting up the students to be good writers, artists, mathematicians, and so on is important. I think it is important, also, to make sure they are prepared for the next grade level. However, I think what is also lost often is reminding oneself about how the lesson(s) is/are preparing the student for their general future.  

In connection with the readings for About the Authors, I enjoyed the exercise of thinking about lesson plans. I was intrigued to read more about different types of lessons from Cleaveland and Ray: When I read about units of study, I instantly thought of my preschoolers and one of their favorite books If You Give a Mouse a Cookie by Laura Numeroff. I have read this book to them a handful of times and one day we did an extension project that stemmed from the book. We took a poll to see who liked chocolate chip cookies, who liked sugar cookies, and who liked peanut butter cookies. Lastly, we counted up our categories and formed totals. The kids and I entitled it, “If You Give a Preschooler a Cookie.” After reading chapter six of About the Authors, I realized that I could take this small step that I took with If You Give a Mouse a Cookie and extend that into a unit.

I feel that Numeroff’s story really focuses on the action of the story moving forward and pacing the story in a fast-pace sequencing sort of manner. I feel that the book really carries the reader through a beginning, middle, and an end that comes full circle. In younger grades, the idea of a story having a beginning, middle, and end is essential to beginning reading and writing. So, I think this would be a good focus for a writing unit for students with applying this as a mentor text. On page 105, Ray and Cleaveland, write that “an overview of the process of writing” is a “process studies”and I think it fits well with the pace and focus of Numeroff’s book. The “process of writing” could include making sure the students’ stories have beginnings, middles, and endings. Perhaps students could pick their own animals to star with a human character in their own stories. The students could employ Numeroff’s book as inspiration for a beginning, middle, and end to their stories as well as pacing and playing with sequencing like coming full circle.

By extending out this idea into a full week, I think it would be fun and impactful to read stories of a similar style. Luckily for us educators and for kids everywhere, Numeroff has written several different stories in the style of If You Give a Mouse a Cookie. For example, the mini lesson on parts of a story could include studying If You Give a Mouse a Cookie, If You Give a Mouse a Muffin, If You Give a Dog a Donut, If You Give a Pig a Pancake, and so on. There are a series of wonderful books that perfectly, in my opinion, show the flow and parts of a story clearly for younger readers. I think these books would be fantastic mentor texts for students to write their own stories focusing on and playing with sequencing and having a beginning, middle, and end in the story. I also think these books could work well for a “product studies” focus on “how to make illustrations work with text.” These stories all have fun illustrations that marry well with the stories they are paired with. I feel that the more I learn about these topics, the better I do at my current job and the more I will be prepared for my future job as a primary school teacher. In addition, I can better understand how students learn.

In terms of the Makes for this Cycle, I want to start off by talking about Cori Hale’s wedding website. I think that this is a wonderful way to do this assignment because she is including both words and photos, which makes it multimodal. In addition, she also chose an assignment that lets the reader learn more about her on a personal level. By getting to see Cori’s website, I felt like I got to know her a bit more. Lastly, I felt that Cori’s work was well written and clear, which, when it comes to teaching, are always essential to effective lessons and classroom time.

Next, I want to discuss Rayn Buford’s Make for Cycle 5. I thought her memes presented ideas in such an informative way, but with such humor! I love when individuals take learning and make it humorous. I feel by making it humorous, one is much more likely to take it in and reflect on it because they are enjoying it. I think Rayn’s memes do just this! In addition, I love how Rayn included some personal reflection on how she viewed writing as a child and how she can teach differently than how she was taught as a child. For example, I particularly liked her discussion on how “….it is OK to focus on the depth our students are embracing instead of deadlines or the chapters that still remain….” I couldn’t agree more with Rayn and I think this is such a wonderful way to approach writing and education!

Lastly, I want to speak about Samone Burge’s write-up and meme. 

I was interested in Samone’s Make because she related it directly to the About the Author reading from Cycle 5. Since I found the ideas about lessons interesting in this Cycle, I was drawn to Samone’s work. I think Samone’s work perfectly represents the ideas presented in Cleaveland and Ray’s discussion on lessons and how to incorporate, as Samone puts it, “reading the writing of others.” I think her meme perfectly reflects the concepts written by both herself and Cleaveland and Ray. In addition, her meme, like Rayn’s memes, employ humor to be engaging and to drive the point home. 

I also think that Samone’s write-up that is paired with her meme is clearly written and concise. I think both attributes, as a teacher, are important to have. In addition, like Rayn, humor is always a good asset to have the classroom as well.

Author Bio: Hello to all! I want to start my biography off with some information about me: My name is Caitlin and I live in Anderson, California. I am currently a preschool teacher. I live for those moments where I see a concept click with a student or they talk through a process or question. I adore seeing their wheels turn and watching them grow in their academics and as little people! When I am not teaching preschoolers, I love spending time with my loved ones. My Monday night softball watching with my fiance, Kody, and our black lab, Beau, is the highlight of my week. I enjoy reading, writing, being outdoors, photography, watching baseball, traveling, cooking, and baking. I am also a student at Chico State University and am working towards my degree in Elementary Education.


Josue Nava 

I had a lot of fun working on projects during the 5th Make Cycle.  It’s not everyday you get to turn in a meme as part of an assignment.  The multimodal composing was definitely something new. It was so much information all at once.  I have to admit I was a bit lost when I began reading the article from Language Arts: I don’t know if I was expecting something other than what I was reading. After a short break I can back and read the article again and it made sense sort-of. I could tell apart all the sections, but I felt it was all thrown together; it felt like chaos on paper so to speak.  Apart from the way it was organized, the content was awesome. I feel like this may be a little too much for me to do my first year, but maybe the third year I’ll be ready for a multimodal form of teaching. The way it was organized was the most challenging thing for me because I like structure and organization and this article was far from it.  I don’t think I would want to teach this way.  I promise I will give it a chance –it may be the best thing I ever do– but for now, I’m going to stick to what I know.  I for sure don’t think I will be able to use this type of system for students in special education (SPED). I feel it may be a little too hard for them, but I would sure love to make a poster or flyer similar to this article in which I can show parents/guardian the student’s progress.  This multimodal approach taught me a new method, one in which it could help students think outside the box.

Now to the nitty gritty of this cycle.  The best part: making my personal calling card.  My own website. I was so excited I emailed my sister and told her about it.  She was confused at first but then I explained why I had made it. She told me everything that needed to be fixed. Making a website is something I thought I would never do.  It was challenging since I thought to myself that this is something I will be using to communicate with parents and students in the future so why not start now.  As time goes, I will improve it and add better features so everyone can check it out. I will send you (Dr. Jaxon) a link to my website a few years from now so you can critique me and maybe give me a few pointers on what I can do to make my website user friendly and cool over all.  

Here are my favorite makes from my peers in make cycle 5:

The first one is by Rebecca Lee; I thought her design was so beautiful.  The website was well made and it had everything a teacher in training should have.  The second one I chose was by Salina Rodriguez; her website was really cool.  I like how simple it was but at the same time sophisticated. Well planned and designed. And last, I really liked Jamie Xayachack’s website too.  She was really clever and it was funny and the layout I thought was really cool.

Here is a screenshot and link to mine.

Author Bio: Josue is from Hamilton City, a small town 10 miles west of Chico. Before attending Chico State, he was at Butte College as a mechanical engineering transfer. While living with a family whose young boy wasn’t speaking yet, he went out of my way to work with him much like he had with his own son. A few weeks later the young boy spoke for the first time. Josue had discovered how much he loves working with kids. 


Jamie Xayachack

Top 3 Cycle 5 Makes

The makes that I gravitated towards most were the teacher portfolios of Jillian Pearson, Janette Herrera, and Sarah Roberts because I also chose to make one for this cycle. Sarah’s Make was enjoyable to look through as she had multiple blog posts that explain the reasons why she’s pursuing the career that she’s chosen. The layout that she chose for this multimodal make was simple and easy to navigate around.Jillian’s portfolio was filled with a variety of pages which were very interesting to scroll through. I like how she suggested a few websites that both students and educators could utilize. Janette’s portfolio also has a simple layout: her whole blog about Creating Writers was most compelling to read as her views of creating writers are like mine.

“Offer mini lessons each day before writing workshop and then let them go to work. To ensure that each student’s progress is being monitored you can have conferences during the workshop time and offer any assistance that is needed. Remember the most important thing here is create a classroom full of students who think of themselves as writers and this should be encouraged as much as possible.” – Janette Herrera

This whole paragraph resonates with me because I’m experimenting with this approach with my students this semester in having them be the curators of their own stories and handmade books. It’s so important for us future educators to assist students into thinking of themselves as writers because they are imaginative and fantasize about situations through made-up stories. That’s already a huge part of story-writing and the only part we really need to help them with is figuring out how to spell words and structure sentences.

Reflections

Ultimately, Cycle 5’s article from Language Arts (see link in Lisa’s post above) made me realize how explorative one can be through teaching. It is possible to refrain from traditional and stiff structure in the classroom and Jane Gilrain made that point clear in the allegory, which was presented at the beginning of the article. Gilrain made me realize that it is quite difficult to break away from norms because society tends to adhere to what works or what has worked in the past and most fear change because it is usually accompanied by an onslaught of intuitive and complex ideas to be dealt with. Art is what shapes the world around us. Everything from the design of a car to ceramic mug has been through a creative process engineered by team of people. This article brought light to how students can learn through collaborative work with others so that they can articulate what they would like to say through various multimodal approaches. Through a multimodal approach to teaching, students can utilize their seemingly never-ending free-flow of energy by projecting it towards projects that require movement and drama. I would love to explore this approach through some theatrical work with the students that I have currently. They are all very invested in creating interesting and unique art projects with me and it would be such an awesome experience to have them hone into their skills in the arts by having them do some theater activities with a theater artist.

Cycle 4 Reflection

Karen Kaufman Orloff expertly conveyed her point of views to her young audience by incorporating didactic, yet simple messages as well as other elements through her books I Wanna Iguana and I Wanna New Room. It’s apparent that Orloff chose to write in first person to let the audience have a better understanding of the personalities within the main character as well as other characters in the book. These books are informative, but the dialogues between characters are persuasive as the main character, Alex, attempts to persuade his parents through letters stating how grown up he is or how great his grades are in school. When children read these books, they are given ideas of persuasion to reciprocate their style of writing from when writing letters to whomever they may concern. These texts aim to convey two major points for children to begin understanding, which are compromising and problem-solving. Both stories lead to happy endings and children can see that through the arguments and information being relayed between Alex and his parents. The instances of bias constantly occur as viewpoints of a young boy and older perspectives (Alex’s parents) write letters to each other as they stay strong in their position of arguments.

Both books are vivid and illustrative with humorous drawing and scenes that easily captivate young eyes. The element of putting the texts in graphic paper was an excellent idea as it gives children an example of what a letter should look like and what a letter should contain. From a more mature perspective, the issues presented in the books may come off as trivial, however, children between the three to eight are dealing with these issues and these issues are so important for educators, parents, or guardians to acknowledge and guide children so that they can develop from them. Utilizing this book would help us in educating children of the importance in confronting personal conflicts and to understand the value in gaining new perspectives of things in life.

This make cycle was interesting to do and it was even more fun to look through other classmates work to see the variety of interpretations of this assignment. With that being said, this assignment also brought light into the fact that students all learn and interpret things differently. There must be a variety of ways for students to approach an assignment to create something to the best of their potential. I really liked how everyone used different sources to create what they made. Having a variety of choices also broadened everyone’s perspective on approaching the assignment.

Author Bio: Jamie Xayachack is a third-year Liberal Studies student at CSU Chico. She is currently working in the Enterprise Elementary School District as an ACE Aide, as well as a Classroom Aide. Having the opportunity to be surrounded by students and other educators at work all day has made her excitement and motivation to become an elementary school teacher grow more with each coming day. Jamie’s overseas volunteer experience as a McConnell SAILS Scholar in classrooms in Asia is what made her choose teaching as a career path she would like to venture on. A few hobbies of hers include hiking and playing Super Smash Bros with friends.


Salina Rodriguez

Erin Russo made a website for herself that I found exceptional.  She found not only different fonts and colors to write about herself in, but she also found pictures that made the reader of her website be able to picture her as a soon to be teacher.  There was just the right amount of color and font without making the website too busy or childish. While it is difficult to present yourself on paper, Erin made it seem flawless with her straight to the point examples of her road to being an educator.  Adding on a video by Carol Dweck to help back her teaching philosophy I found creative and powerful for her overall website.

Taylor Roberts Make 5 I found to be done exceptionally well because she challenged herself.  Taylor challenged herself to create a lesson plan and fulfill it herself. I found this to be extra special because it is not even something I am yet to challenge myself with, yet what better way to practice?  She took pictures of her actual work that included information about the sun and the moon along with drawings. I thought this was a really great way to practice mini lessons with students. This allows students to first be able to learn about the subject and then be able to present what was learned in the way they find most comfortable.  I like she started with basic topics because as teachers we can learn to grow as the topics and age of the student grows; however this was a really great way to practice a lesson plan along with mini lessons and have a physical example that can even be used in her future classroom.

Shelby Baccala’s Make 5 was the most impressive Make I could find.  The reason I found hers so impressive was because I felt that her website could be up and looking for hiring districts right now and she would certainly beat me out at any job.  Her way of presenting not just herself and her philosophies, but her way of presenting her experience with pictures to support her past made her website outstanding. Shelby used different colors, fonts, and pictures to keep whomever is reading about her interested and wanting to read on.  This website I see being done so well that she could use it tomorrow to apply for a job. Great job Shelby!

Week 11 Updates

Week 11 Updates

Hi everyone,

Grade Update: Moments ago you should have received a grade update that takes us through to tonight’s multimodal make. I left comments on the chapter 6 discussion and memes: you all have some great ideas for lessons in your responses that you could build upon for our next make cycle. I’m glad you are able to take so much away from these chapters. I highly recommend other books by Katy Wood Ray too: she has a whole book simply called The Writing Workshop: Working Through the Hard Parts. Many of you also mentioned the use of notebooks, so I wanted to point you toward a couple resources for using notebooks in your classrooms:

I hope you are keeping a Google Folder or something that works for you to save resources and ideas for your classrooms. 😉

Make Cycle 6 (Now With Partners): Our next make cycle is up on our course website–Make Cycle 6: Creating Writing Assignments. This is a three week make cycle since you will be creating your own writing assignments/activities and trying them out together. I have placed you with a partner: you will write an assignment for your partner to try, she/he will try it by writing the assignment and giving you feedback and visa versa. Your partners can be found on the Make Cycle 6 page and below. It will be crucial to complete work on time in this cycle so that you don’t hold up your partner; I have no doubt you’ll be respectful to each other. I also have a couple of examples for this make on the page as well.

Featured Curators for Make 5 (Maritza, Yorleidi, Caitlin, Josue, Salina, Lisa, and Jamie): your blogs are due to me by Tuesday, April 10 in a shared Google Doc. I’ll send a follow up email tomorrow after the makes come in tonight and you can also see the previous email I sent with information. You’ll also send me a bio and a photo for the blog. Thank you in advance!

Partners for the make for Make Cycle 6:

  • Kellie/Julie
  • Christina/Rebecca L
  • Chad/Lisa
  • Jamie/Brittany
  • Janette/Sandra
  • Erin/Jillian
  • Chelsea/Rebecca S
  • Rayn/Salina
  • Shelby/Samone
  • Ruben/Hannah
  • Sean/Dana
  • Jennifer/Rebecca B
  • Cheyenne/Maritza
  • Brianna/Alma
  • Adriana/Nancy
  • Karen/Caitlin
  • Raenni/Josue
  • Veronica/Yorleidi

 

Featured Bloggers Make Cycle 4: Hannah, Cheyenne, Samone, Adriana, Alma, Erin, and Sean

Featured Bloggers Make Cycle 4: Hannah, Cheyenne, Samone, Adriana, Alma, Erin, and Sean

Hannah Hughes

Hello everyone! I truly hope you all had a lovely spring break! Now that we have sprung forward with the time change, and in this class, we are that much closer to becoming teachers in our own classroom! Being part of this google community and sharing with all of you the last couple months has been extremely inspiring! Each new discussion and make cycle has added a new layer to our writing repertoire that will help us as we learn how to teach our students how to write. We started the week off by discussing the 4th and 5th chapters of our book, About the Authors: Writing Workshop With Our Youngest Writers. Then we looked at some great mentor texts to help develop our idea of what compelling argumentative writing looks like. And finally, we created our own persuasive works to share with the community.

Chapter 4 really begins to take an overall look into the steps it takes for students to write books. One of the big ideas expressed in this chapter is that writing must be an enjoyable process that helps students find their own writing strengths as they learn to create. Students need to feel they are already adequate with their skills they arrive with so they can learn to build off of where they are at. I really appreciate the book allowing us as future teachers to see this viewpoint because often students who feel they can’t meet the expectations of being a “good” writer won’t even try. Dana C touched on this matter in her response and said, “A six-year-old’s writing differentiates from an experienced writer. We cannot expect so much from them at such a young age when they are still learning and growing. We must be there to support them. This was a lot of help when I began to think about myself as a future teacher. I want to teach first grade, so I know now that I have to start slow and let my students show me what they can do when it comes to their writing then slowly bring in tips and tricks in order for them to gain knowledge upon their writing.” I love how she acknowledges and summarizes in her own words how she now has a better understanding of how to teach her future students to write because of this chapter.

Chapter 5 takes a look at what connections are being made when we look at texts and then imagine them into our own ideas. I love how Lisa focuses on teaching her students strategies for writing instead of giving the ideas to write about. On page 84, a quote that really stood out to me was

“We keep coming back to this point of identity again and again because we just can’t get away from how significant it is to the learning we see.”

When children have an identity about their work, they feel like they can take on and expand their own ideas, as well as others. A technique I know many of us found really neat in chapter 5 was the fishbowl strategy. Lisa Valdez points out that “The ‘fishbowl’ conferences are also a great way to have the children learn what to expect in their own conferences, as well as minimize any anxiety they may feel. It also can help them to see what is expected of them, so that they can make their own adjustments prior to their own conferences. It reinforces the idea that the conferences are not punitive, but constructive.” We all know peers are one of the biggest influences children have in their lives. That reaches to all areas including school work. Of course, I think that making sure that as teachers we make the effort to process these “conferences” with our students will make a huge difference to how effective the fishbowl strategy will actually be.

After learning a bit about the writing process, we took a look at some mentor texts to help inspire us with our makes. A text I really enjoyed was I Wanna Iguana, by Karen Kaufman Orloff. This is a story about Alex who wants to adopt his friend’s iguana. I found it interesting how the book is told from both his and his Mom’s perspectives as they write notes to each other. Alex doesn’t just whine and beg to get the iguana, but carefully constructs persuasive arguments why he and this iguana belong together. Veronica Oregel shares her thoughts on this mentor text saying: “The authors expressed their opinions through the characters in their stories and did it very well. For example, Alex was not faced by his parents telling him no he could not have something. Instead he got creative and found different ways of asking until a compromise was met between parents and child.” I think this is great way to help students understand why creating such thoughtful argumentative writings within the context of their own life can be useful. All of the mentor text assignments we have done thus far have been really easy to imagine how they might translate into assignments I can use with my future students. However, the use of these argumentative texts seems like such a fun way to get creative and help students learn how to develop and organize their own ideas about what they want in life.

Click, Clack, Moo: Cows that Type by Doreen Cronin was a very funny and cute picture book that uses the argumentative writing style to tell the story. It was really neat to be able to see it from the side of the cows and I loved how the animals were coming up with their arguments of what they needed in order for the farmer to comply. Brittany Walker touches on the personification used in this text. She says, “The author gave human characteristics to the animals. Obviously, cows can’t talk or type on a type writer, however the author really made the reader see the side of the cows and their wants and needs. For instance, the cows told the farmer that the barn was very cold at night and they wanted some blankets. I also liked how the animals were coming up with their arguments of what they needed in order for the farmer to get what he wants. This would be a great writing assignment for students to take to role of someone or something else. They could write an argumentative piece in character that has wants or needs that they need to convey to someone else.” One of my favorite things to read about in our discussions is when others comment on ideas of how they might implement some of these strategies into their own classrooms. I am always taking note of these amazing ideas you all have shared!

My favorite part of the weekly cycles are the makes of course! There are always so many makes that surprise and inspire me! These personalized projects really allow us the opportunity to practice what we want our students to do, which is to create works that are meaningful, compelling, and well thought out. For the assignment this week, we had many options to choose from: an advice column, a series of posters, a flyer, an advertisement, a book etc. Many of these projects were compelling because of the message they were conveying, while others were interesting because of their visual appeal.

Quite a few of our makes this week touched on some topics that were not quite as light hearted as wanting an iguana, but conveyed extremely important messages about mental health that are so relevant and necessary in our world today! It meant a lot to me that so many of our future teachers shared this message. One I took notice to immediately was a series of posters that was created by Raenni Pilgrim. Her posters used a pineapple as a message of positivity to help students with self esteem. The second poster, in her series of 3, she used an alphabet poem with the word pineapple, which is visually appealing and helps to get across the message in a fun way. I really love what she had to say about why she wanted it to be so bright and colorful even though the topic can be dark. “I created an anti bullying campaign that is geared toward positivity and encouraging students instead of telling them don’t bully. When you google anti bullying you usually see a big red circle with the word bully crossed out in the center. I wanted my posters to motivate higher self esteem in students or to at least start the ball rolling on helping others.”

Another make that caught my eye right away was Grace Pablo’s posters on homelessness. The images combined with message on the posters were extremely moving. I loved how she was able to have such a strong message with so few words. Grace was able to touch on the stereotypes these people face regularly: “When thinking of homelessness many automatically think of people who end up on the streets because of drug or alcohol abuse. It is easy to judge and criticize them based on what they look like.” Immediately a thought that comes to my mind, is that one day, we may have a child in our classroom who is homeless, or have family who are homeless. Our attitude in the classroom towards others will create the atmosphere they thrive, (or don’t thrive) in. Lexi Mitchell commented on Grace’s make saying “..it’s so easy to pass judgement on anyone, but especially the homeless. I really like how your make gave them a voice.” The notion that our writing can be a way to give someone a voice, who otherwise might not have one, whether it be a cow on a farm, or a judged homeless man, is a powerful thing.

A really fun make to read this cycle was the story jumper book “Happy, Healthy, Super Teeth” written by Beatriz Salazar. She used a style of writing to make a topic that is actually important and serious feel accessible to students. She used really adorable images along with great information to express the importance of taking care of your teeth. Just like our mentor text Click Clack Moo: Cows That Type, Beatriz did a great job using personification to tell her story. The different teeth all take turns explaining who they are and why they are important to take care of! It was very cute.

The last make I want to touch on that I connected with was Alma Rose Lopez’ Autism Awareness flyer.

This is a subject I am extremely passionate about myself. I work in the field of early intervention for children under the age of 3 who are having social and communication delays and are possibly at risk for Autism. I also have a child of my own who is 4 and has special needs. As awareness is spreading, in both the school setting and in society in general, there are a lot of misconceptions about what it means to have Autism. On her flyer she puts “Awareness is a step closer to breaking stereotypes that get drawn to everyone but mostly get drawn to those that are considered “disabled” on not being able to make a living or contribute to society.” Alma did a wonderful job of highlighting important information about people with Autism, as well as including in large print when World Autism Awareness Day. This gives us a way to act on what we have read, or even just learn more about it. I love how she says this about her make, “I also included pictures to get a visual perspective on the don’ts and the overall meaning of Autism in people. Honestly, I think I was influenced by all the mentor’s texts on trying to prove a point. I guess I kind of combined all the mentor’s meanings and created a new type towards my work.” We want our students to be able to use ideas from many different resources and use what works for them and I think Alma did a great job showing us how that can be done.

Honestly, there were a lot of powerful and amazing makes that I did not mention. I know with Spring Break it may have been easy for us to put reading through them all on the back burner, but you will not regret taking the time to read not only the ones mentioned on the blog, but everyone’s! We had Professor Kittle’s class join us for this make, so we have even more inspiration and knowledge to add into our teaching buckets than usual! I know mine is overflowing with ideas right now!

Author Bio: My name is Hannah, I am 30 years old. I am from the Bay area but have lived in the Chico and surrounding area for the last 12 years. I am a very busy lady! I work full time, am a mom to four-year-old with special needs, a wife to a disabled vet, and I am finally in my last year of college! I love to hike and just take random (day) road trips as a little family. I also like reading, cooking, or watching Netflix, as well as watching/listening to podcasts and Ted talks. I have worked in the community for the past 10 years directing local after school programs, but about two years ago I switched from after school life to early intervention, where I found my love of working with special needs kiddos. That inspired me to get back in school to finally reach my goal of being a teacher. I can’t wait!


Cheyenne Boles

I am so happy to have a chance to write about make cycle four because it has so far been my most favorite. I love anything that’s trying to persuade me just because it feels like a test.

We started out these last couple weeks with Chapter 4 and 5 from About the Authors. Both of these chapters honestly made me a little nervous about becoming teacher just because how truly difficult it can be to really teach children the essence of preplanning and brainstorming before creating a story or even a simple homework sheet. In Chapter 4, there was an example that hit home 100% with me: a young boy was writing a short story on snakes; he changed the word mistake to “missnake.” When I was in 2nd or 3rd grade I did this exact thing (different word of course) and the teacher turned it down just like the boy in Chapter 4. I think things like this is so important to allow children to do even though it may not be the most grammatically correct. Chapter 4 really pushed this because taking the imagination away from our students also allows them to lose their motivation when creating these future stories.

Chapter 4 also talked about letting children feed off of each other’s work and to not see it as copying. Allowing them to choose their topic and take an idea that their friend did the week before and make their own is the foundation of an amazing short story! This really provides some self help not to mention the inspiration from their peers instead of the teacher.

Chapter 5 had just as amazing viewpoints as Chapter 4; in fact, some that I can’t wait to use in my future classroom. The first one being, bringing in books that inspire your students to make one just like it, or a book that has a format that you would love to see some of your students try. When reading these books, it would be really good to point out “look at this, look at what this writer is doing, this is so cool, maybe one of you could try this next time”: just some boosts of knowledge without fully telling them what you’re wanting them to do. The thing I loved most about Chapter 5 was that it provided the insider knowledge of a “walk through,” this being, take a book and read it aloud while having the students point out the things they noticed or might like to use next time with their own story line.

The next section we were asked to tackle was Appendix E. This section really focused on text structures and how creating them can make six year old work that much better as simple as it may be. On pages 180 and 181 it gives actual examples of text structures of a book about sea creatures, and although it may not flow like a college level essay, it has the basic idea of things that live in the ocean such as Octopi, Sharks, Dolphins and Whales. Something as simple as different text boxes helps the students really learn and understand what they’re writing about as well as preparing themselves for a flowing essay just by adding the transition sentences.

Then for my favorite part of this make cycle, the mentor texts! These children’s books were funny, cute, and had a lot of great ideas for future adult and children writers. The first one was I Wanna Iguana and it was so fun and totally relatable. I really liked how many of these texts used the illustrations to make the letters come to life. The arguments between the characters (mother and son) were so much like the conversations I used to have with my mom at that age. The young boy’s points to his arguments made me wonder why I never thought of that when I was trying to win over a puppy in the 3rd grade.

The second book we read was Click Clack Moo; this book was one I have read before and I think it’s a really fun one for the kids because what isn’t fun about animals coming to life let alone knowing how to argue and type! The repetition in this book was strong and really helpful to follow along even when the animals changed from cows to ducks, etc. My favorite out of all the books we read was The Day The Crayons Quit. I have never seen something so cute and original in my entire life! The illustrations were amazing and I love all the little details! The letters were the color of the crayon writing the message and some of the illustrations drifted over into the other page to make it more realistic and fun hearted. The author did an amazing job on this book and I really look forward to using it in my future classroom.

The last story we read was I Want a New Room. This book was written by the same author of I Wanna Iguana; he put such hard work and creativity into his stories I would definitely recommend them to anyone.

Our final step to Make Cycle 4 was our “makes.” We had the option of many different things such as campaign posters, argument passages, Advice columns and many more. I personally chose to make three campaign posters on empowering women, but I chose a few of my favorites to share with you created by my fellow classmates.

Raenni Pilgrim did the first one I want to share with you. She decided to make some hand drawn posters, which I loved! Her focus was anti bullying and her posters promoted positivity and encouragement to not bully. The thing that made me notice her posters was the fact that they are much different then the typical anti bullying poster (red circle with a line through it). Also she targeted the victim rather than the bully; her focus was to build them up and not allow harsh actions tear them down.

Erin Spranger did the second one I chose to highlight. Erin chose to do a rant, which I found quite funny. She rants about slow walkers and how they are so distracted by their phones. This couldn’t be more true! People get so caught up in social media, a text message or an email, and although it may be important it is so annoying for those around them! I really enjoyed Erin’s post and I thought you might also.

Dear slow walker,
I understand that you might not want to go where ever it is that you are going, but at least try to walk in a straight line. By not walking in a straight line, it is preventing me from passing you. It is also causing me to be later to my destination than I was originally planning. When you choose to not walk in a straight line and I try to pass you, it causes you to almost run into me because you start drifting over to the side I’m trying to pass you on.
I also understand that whatever it is, maybe a text message, that is making you to stare at your phone, causing you to progressively slow down, may be important. But if you are going to slow down because you are trying to not run into anything while you stare down at your phone, step off to the side. Don’t cause everyone else who is in a hurry to get to where they are going to walk slower because you aren’t being considerate. Or just wait to look at your phone until you get to where you are going. Nothing is that important to cause you to hold up people trying to walk because you are trying to read the message that was sent you.
So please, I’m begging you slow walker, either walk in a straight line to allow people to go around you or step off to the side to read that, “It’s too important to wait” message on your phone.

From,
The annoyed person behind you

The last “make” I wanted to share with you was done by Baylee Galloway. Baylee wrote an advice column from a girl wanting advice about moving in with her boyfriend. I love how personal she made it by really seeming like “Confused Caty” needed some serious advice. The response given to Caty was very professional and helpful! I really do think that if anyone in our class was going through a similar problem, they could totally take her advice.

Baylee’s Post:

Ask Amy, I am in desperate need of your help!
My boyfriend I have been with for about a year now asked me to move in with him!! I don’t know if me moving in with him will be too fast or if I should just do it. But moving in with someone is a big deal. I mean I like him love him maybe but this is a big commitment. What if he just absolutely drives me crazy if I move in??? Sometimes I just want to be alone and have my own space you know? I’ve lived by myself a long time what if I can’t live with anyone else?
Please help I have no idea what to do!
Sincerely, Confused Caty

Dear Confused Caty,
You’re right moving in with your significant other is a big step in any type of relationship. But him asking you shows where he wants your relationship to go. It seems like he is in it for the long haul. Write out a pros and cons list of living with your partner, write down all of the potential problems and issues that you two might encounter. Ultimately you have to ask yourself if you are ready to take that next step in your relationship with him. If you are talk to him about all of the things that you are weary about. Talking and letting your partner know where you stand and how you are feeling is always important. It shows that you care and want to talk through your feelings.
I hope this helped!!
Sincerely, Ask Amy

All of these stories and texts for this makes cycle were so interesting and super enjoyable so I was very excited to get to be a featured blogger this week. I hope you enjoyed!

Author Bio: This is my first semester at Chico State to get closer to my ultimate goal of being an elementary teacher. I am 20 years old and am a momma to the cutest fur baby, Pongo. He is a pit-bull that just turned one year old and is totally named after 101 Dalmatians. I love all things Disney and, of course, shopping!


Samone Burge

For Make Cycle 4 we read chapters 4 and 5, along with Appendix E. We observed the argumentative letters from our mentor texts, and even had the opportunity of creating our own form of persuasive writing.

For the first the About the Authors portion of Make Cycle 4, the response that stood out to me the most was done by Dana C. think that I was so intrigued by her response style because it sort of reminded me my own. Often times I want to write something short and sweet but can never seem to complete an assignment without sharing all that I have learned and observed from the book. In reading Dana’s response, I felt like she must be the same way as she had so much insightful content to share and I am so glad that she did. While both of our responses had a lot of information, Dana gave me a new perspective on the same topics and delve deeper into topics of the chapter that I barely scratched the surface of.

Chapter 4 took us deeper into teaching even the youngest students the process of writing.This chapter of About the Authors showed us how students can use the writing process to write books. They begin with prewriting. Prewriting includes finding ideas for writing projects, so based on the instruction of the teachers, students will choose what topic to cover within that introduction. It also includes growing ideas for a writing project, for a young author this means learning to take the time to think and talk about the idea they want to write about, before they actually begin to write it down. The final step of the prewriting is planning and drafting. The chapter then goes into the details of revision, editing, and publishing.

The most interesting part the author shared was how they don’t wait for students to learn the rules of writing before allowing them to write. They have students write first and uncover the rules of writing along the way. I was drawn to Dana C.’s response because she seemed to notice the same thing. Dana C really underlined the importance of allowing the children to learn to write through writing:

I learned quite a bit. Many of those things were eye opening and made me realize I cannot rush students into the writing process. Each student may have their own process, but the main thing is to get them writing first then later focus on the rest. As teachers, we have to learn from our students and see what works best for them” (Dana C).

I was really intrigued by her interpretation of the chapter because in her response she pointed out how as teachers we must start slow and have realistic expectations for young writers. Through Dana’s response I learned that we can teach children through their own knowledge of writing (allowing them to build upon prior knowledge of writing and simply get started first) and still expect their best efforts without pressuring them to produce the work of professional writers at this point: “A six-year-old’s writing differentiates from an experienced writer. We cannot expect so much from them at such a young age when they are still learning and growing. We must be there to support them” (Dana C).

Chapter 5 was all about the whole class lessons the author gives young students to help them explore the possibilities of writing. They expose the students to different styles of writing and allow the children to uncover differences and similarities and to begin to realize that they can try and incorporate these different forms of writing into their own work. I thought this was brilliant because it helps children to naturally build up a knowledge of writing skills through learning first hand from experienced authors. Dana couldn’t have put the ideas behind the mini lessons better when she said, “…it shows us different ideas on how to teach students to write rather than what to write. The students already have their own ideas on what it is they want to write about, but we must just help them find ways to write about those certain ideas” (Dana C).  

Appendix E was about teaching children to structure texts in interesting ways.  The author teaches the children to recognize the structure of texts by helping them see the same structures used by different authors in different books so that they understand that the particular structure is not limited to one particular author or one particular text.  Dana helped me understand this lesson in a new way: “Appendix E taught me that structured texts are very important. As teachers, we should make sure our students know that each and every one of their ideas or thoughts can combine in order to make one big idea” (Dana C). Her perspective really opened my eyes to how important helping children to understand and compare and contrast structure of others’ writing is in developing their own writing. These are the types of responses needed to really learn from others!

The Mentor texts this week were from the books: I Wanna Iguana, The Day the Crayons Quit, Click Clack Moo, and I Wanna New Room. Each of these stories gives a riveting demonstration of argumentative writing. When I began observing the responses to the mentor texts, the one that stood out to me the most was from Karen Fawn. Where I think my brain mostly focused on simply the arguments and bright illustrations of each persuasive story, Karen noticed so much more:

“I did notice that all four of the books used quite a bit of figurative language like personification, hyperboles, alliteration, and sarcasm” (Karen Fawn).

Karen taught me that I Wanna Iguana used a lot of hyperboles like when the mom said nobody would marry him with a six foot reptile. I also noticed that Karen and I were both drawn to the fact that each story was shared in a way that appeared like real handwritten or typed letters on each page. She pointed out to me that Click Clack Moo was full of personification because the cows are doing so many human things like typing. She also taught me about pathos and logos by informing me about how these are used in The Day the Crayons Quit, as the crayons play on the reader’s emotions and facts and demonstrations in order to persuade them to their point. What I loved most about Karen’s response was that it was educational but in a very entertaining and humorous way. With each sentence I could feel myself smiling from what she said and found myself wanting to read on and learn more. This is what is needed in a teacher!  

The final part of Make 4 was the most exciting. It was where we students got the chance to create persuasive work of our own. I chose to do a letter inspired by The Day the Crayons Quit to myself written from my over worn black boots, but my favorite make was also inspired by this story from Chelsea Peterson. In her make, “The Great Toy Rebellion, the toy cars write a letter to Nicholas about how they don’t like to be smashed by big trucks or rolled through mud. The dragon is tired of having to play the bad guy and the firetruck is depressed about being replaced by Batman. The favorite toy, Batman, has no complaints and no sense of modesty. He loves being the top toy and believes everyone else is just jealous. This was such an awesome read and a beautiful demonstration of argumentative writing. This is what is needed in an author!  

Each of these Make 4 curators taught me so much about our learning process this week. I learned to observe our readings, mentor texts, and make assignments in a new way that will force me to think harder and dig deeper for future assignments.

Author Bio: I am Samone and I just turned 29 years old. I have been happily married for 9 years, and I have four children ages 10, 7, 5, and two. I have been working as a preschool teacher at my former community college for about 3 years and I love it. I lie awake at night because I am woken up with new ideas about fun ways to teach children. I have a hard time focusing because I have so many things I want to do in arts and crafts and teaching but they all revolve around children. I have always known I wanted to be a wife and mother and have always had the feeling I was meant to teach. I love preschool but am excited about exploring the kindergarten age. My goal is to spread the joy of learning like wild fire, so no one and nothing will ever be able to put it out.  


Adriana Cea

Hi everyone. I just wanted to say that the quality of work that everyone has produced is amazing. When we started this class I truly was intimidated by writing and having such “broad” guidelines. I think that our text does a good job of making writing simple and enjoyable. When taking these methods into our writings, it really does make our work so much better and it is clear with all the work that everyone is producing, so good job!

When taking a step back and looking at all the Makes it was really difficult to pick just a couple. I think one thing that all the Makes have that made them stand out to me is the fact that people wrote about something personal or issues that are currently in the spotlight. Chapter 4 and 5 really breaks down making writing simple and creating a routine in which students always know what to expect. Chapter 4 talks about each and every break down of writing like brainstorming, closing, and editing for punctuation and spelling. Chapter 5 also gives use more examples of how to combine writing into everyday activities. I think the most important aspects that we take away from both chapters has to be routine of writing and embedding writing into every day. To create quality work we must change the way we go about writing.

Here are some of my favorite makes this week from our peers:

Ashley Evans and her argument about banishing Child Leashes: Ashley immediately grabbed my attention with her interesting argument and catchy title. I personally hate leashes but I wanted to see what kind of arguments can be used so that we can get rid of those things.  I have always thought that the leashes make the children look like pets, which they clearly aren’t, but I never really thought much about any more arguments. Ashley states, “Parents exerting excessive control: Young kids need direction and in most cases that comes from their parents setting guidelines. It’s not overboard to make a child with a bad temperament do some things they don’t want, but strapping a leash on them is not one of those things. There are cases, and most people may have witnesses a situation similar, when the child is showing strong disdain towards wearing the “child harness.” I think that the about of information Ashley gave is important because it gives us logic. She accurately defended her reasons and gives us more logical explanations, such as the fact that a child harness can create certain feelings with the children. She also did it in a way that was easy to understand and it wasn’t filled with confusing science.

Yorleidi Langarcia’s arguments on DACA really hit close to home. Over the weeks of our course, our work has proved that if it comes from a personal places, it makes out writing so much better. I was drawn to Yorleidi’s arguments because of the tension there is regarding DACA and immigration reform. I think Yorleidi did an amazing job about giving us all of the information over DACA and giving us helpful tips. I believe that it doesn’t matter what side of the argument you are on, but we have to find a way to fix the current situation. Your Tapatio salsa is also pretty funny and brings a little bit of laughter into an intense situation. I also think that adding links with important information made her posters stand out. She is not only giving her argument but adding supplement information about DACA. I could definitely see her posters being distributed to people. I know many people who are documented and are still afraid of police and ICE. I think a chunk of this comes from misinformation and lack of information about their rights. I think having this information is important. Good job getting all this information together.

Janette Herrera’s argument on the Nation’s Walk Out Protest and gun violence in schools was refreshing. I really enjoyed reading information by someone who actually experienced the protest. I think right now we have a lot of misinformation going around that will stun the solution. I think the simple slogan of “Thoughts and prayers aren’t bulletproof” is powerful. I live a few minutes away from where a man went on a rampage killing his wife, making his way to a school while killing people on his way and then opening fire on campus while children were going to class. The shooting at Rancho Tehama really changed everything for us. Schools now are doing lock down drills every week and the police presence at schools have increased.  While I don’t think that banning guns will fix the issue, giving our youth a chance to give their opinions in situations that are impacting them will be the change that we needed. I have students that start freaking out over the sound of a book dropping on the floor. Having people start the conversation is the beginning of all the change.

Good job everyone! It was hard to pick out work so keep up all the good work!

Author Bio: My name is Adriana Cea and I just transferred over from Butte College. I hope to finish completing my bachelors at Chico State in the next couple semesters. I love working on my art and expanding my knowledge in the arts. I love spending time with my many siblings and just getting out of my regular routines. I am constantly curious about education and new information and techniques.


Alma Rosa Lopez

After reading chapter four, I liked that there are ways to discover a variety of processes students use on their writing. I like how the writing processes are based on the students needs and how their mindsets may process writing overall and how they can use their own writing. I like the idea one of the  the authors had on allowing the students to write first that way they can write however they are used to writing before a process is established on them. This is a way to kind of observe and see where a student stands before creating a process that doesn’t suit them at all on their development of writing. Giving students a step by step process can be difficult for them to focus on or even remember! So I believe it’s best to just focus on one thing at a time until they have improved that skill, at least when students are beginning to learn about writing. Also, before students start to learn about errors, I think they need to focus on their thoughtful writing and why it’s important to create a piece of writing that has some thoughts before learning about revisions among minor edits and errors. Once they have achieved that they then will receive guidance in increasing their development and adding a couple more steps at a time. The authors make a great point on how important it is to help students develop their skills and increase their ability. Also, when students are set on one step they will feel confident to move on and won’t forget the step due to them fully understanding it.

After reading chapter five, I got to learn a lot on what’s appropriate on operating mini lessons with students. I liked how the lessons are based on “sharing control” and allowing students to lead, discuss, or even operate a certain part of the lesson. It can be stressful and discomforting at times for a teacher or students based on reactions and quality given. Giving the students the ability to run a lesson or lead a certain part of the lesson is giving them an opportunity to express their knowledge and look forward to it. It also is giving students an opportunity to learn from each other, such as how Kayla taught and expressed her book idea to the whole class. Students can learn a lot from each other and get lots of practice on how to help one another and express their knowledge to the whole class. Before connecting students works with other mentor texts it’s important as a teacher to learn and teach about the author’s texts beforehand in order to help students make connections of those texts with their own. Overall, the ideal goal is to give and guide students towards some techniques they can use on their writing, instead of teaching them what to write. The overall concept of the lessons is to get students to thinking about how they got their ideas and illustrations from. This gets them to thinking like future authors and understanding and connecting with how the authors are inspired.

In the Unity Study E,  I was able to learn the importance of text structure and how important it is to include it and teach it. By teaching students text structure you are allowing and guiding students to think in a “tangible way” on how they write. This helps the students get to focus on how they write in a thoughtful process, while creating less errors and revisions. I like that the authors included text structure as being important and something that teachers should observe and connect them to examples on which can be very helpful for students. This also will help students on learning different types of text structures and how to examine them among others works. For example, Kayla had a structure of repetition among her informative text  on showing us what animals are capable of doing. Overall, text structure is important to establish and observe the structures there are out there Once someone is able to find text structures in other texts they then will know how they might establish their own structure.

The interesting discussions we had about the ideas this week in our G+ Community was on how powerful mini lessons can be for students on being able to “share control” on the lesson being taught or discussed. This allows students to look forward to leading the lesson and getting to  share and express their way of thinking and feeling that they are having throughout the lesson. Another interesting discussion we had was on how important it is to help students get on the right direction with guidance but without discouraging their thoughtful process they have on writing the way they do.

After looking at all the makes in make cycle four, three stood out to me. One of them being Raeni Pilgrims’ make. She created a great make on a way to help students reflect on themselves and on others. Her idea on creating an anti bullying poster is needed for students and in a classroom setting to create awareness. I like her different take on her posters: instead of telling students right away what they shouldn’t do, she creates a motivational message on helping students see how they can build up their self-esteem and towards others. Students look at these posters and learn to understand and think about the actions needed to take place to create a safe environment. Overall, I like her intent on focusing on another issue that occurs in bullying besides it being a physical aspect, instead it also is an emotional abuse. This make Raeni made reflects on chapter four what the process is offered instead of including a set of steps. This allows students to know what direction to choose from by looking at the poster and get to choose from one of those actions provided. This also leads to chapter five on creating a formal approach to help students understand the main message on how to prevent bullying by reflecting on themselves and get guided in the right direction.

The second make that caught my attention was Taylor Roberts make on the awareness and prevention of suicide. I loved how powerful her posters are on connecting with her audience on giving a sense of understanding their struggle and letting them know that they are not alone.  I also love how informative her posters are on providing statistics and the types of signs to look out for on those who are struggling with their emotions. These posters are designed for people to not be afraid or feel alone to reach out for help from anyone. I believe this kind of topic should be incorporated into some type of mini lesson for a group of students that are age appropriate to understand and reflect upon. This also would be a great way to connect and be able to express feelings with one another while receiving a sense of support and resources on reaching out for help.

The third make I chose is Rebecca Barragan’s classroom rules. She focuses on an awareness of how important it is to create a safe caring environment with the spread of kindness. I like her take on these posters on providing a visual and informative piece with the quotes provided, which allow students to see and decide upon how they should address their actions in the classroom and around people in general. This kind of make reminds me of the readings where students decide their path. However, as future educators we have the ability to redirect students to the right path and help them make wise choices on the type of action(s). As well, as helping students understand the different types of settings and situations and how that shouldn’t reflect on having a negative environment and actions.

Author Bio: Hello everyone! My name is Alma Rosa Lopez, but everyone calls me Alma for short. I’m 20 years old and I live in Orland, CA. This is my first year at Chico State as a transfer student. I transferred from Butte College and ended up in Chico State due to the great Liberal Studies program they offer.  I plan to receive my BA in spring 19 and then plan to enter the credential program in the fall. After all that, I plan to continue my education by finishing it with a Master’s in education. The interests I have are that I love all music, the outdoors, traveling, and animals. I also love to hike beautiful places and get crafty. I’m also a huge fan of all things Disney. I want to teach general education and special education, however, I’m more interested in teaching for special education. I want to teach children in K-12 for special education and those in general education I would like to teach those in 2-12 grades. I want to be a teacher because I love children and their amazing outspokenness and curiosity. I also want to make a positive difference in children’s lives and in their education. Most importantly, I want to break the stereotypes that get labeled and defined as individuals with disabilities. I want to inspire our society that children with disabilities can have the same abilities as others and can create new abilities. Overall, I want society to stop defining individuals with labels and instead of noticing their abilities instead of their disabilities and get treated the same as an individual without a disability.


Erin Russo

For make cycle 4, we had the opportunity to explore compelling arguments. What I like most about this genre of writing is that it provides a platform for opinion.

We began this make by reading About the Authors: Chapter 4 & 5 and Appendix E and posting about what in these chapters spoke to us, was interesting, or perhaps even confusing or unclear. Chapter 4 in About the Authors reiterates the importance of getting little ones writing before we instruct and fine tune the writing process. Karen Fawns says, “In chapter 4 I find it intriguing that to begin a writing workshop you don’t teach students a process or give them steps to follow at first, for you just give them some paper and a pencil and ask them to make something with writing.  At first, I was thinking that is crazy chaos in the making, but as I read on it says that through observation you can see what the children already know or don’t know, so you build upon those foundations it made sense.” It can seem counterintuitive to begin anything in the classroom without explicit instruction and Karen does a great job explaining the importance of using this tactic when getting our students writing.

As Rebecca Lee sums up, “In chapter 5, (we) learned about all the things I can teach in a writing workshop. These include techniques, strategies, understandings, conventions, and questions.” In our mini-lessons, we will use a variety of texts to help give students ideas for “how” they can write their books. I love that students will be able to absorb and apply this information more effectively because we will have instilled a writing identity upon them. One idea that educators can use with their students that resonated with many of us was described by Christina Barbaccia as “having a class study published writing.  Having the class involved in the study of a particular author can benefit students in their writing.” Christina also provided a great example of how this would look in a classroom, saying “when reading a particular text, you can ask the students what they notice in the book’s structure, and then the teacher can write the student’s comments on a chart. Once the students are finished with their analysis, the teacher then can go over these features and encourage students to replicate any of these ideas in their own books.” Learning from mentor texts in this course to create our own work is a great way for us to practice studying and applying the tactics used in other authors’ writings.

For this weeks mentor texts, we first looked at I Wanna Iguana and I Wanna New Room by Karen Kaufman Orloff; these adorable children’s books were written as a series of convincing letters back and forth between parent and child. Cheyenne Boles captured many of our feeling this week when she said “I LOVED the mentor texts this week. They were cute, funny and had a lot of great ideas for future adult and children writers. I Wanna Iguana was so fun and totally relatable. I really liked how many of these texts used the illustrations to make the letters come to life.” We also read The Day the Crayons Quit by Drew Daywalt, which also used the letter writing format, which can be very useful in argumentative writing to persuade an audience. Click, Clack Moo Cows That Type by Moreen Cronin was the other mentor text this week. This was a book about animals that used a typewriter to convey demands to the farmer. I like how Brittany Walker was able to see how this story could be used in her classroom one day. She said, “this would be a great writing assignment for students to take to role of someone or something else. They could write an argumentative piece in character that has wants or needs that they need to convey to someone else. I think this would be a fun way to write and bring out creativity in students.” I agree with her, and I think that this is evidence that Brittany is already beginning to think like a teacher.

The options for creating a compelling argument make this week were many. The choices included writing an advice column, making convincing posters, creating an advertisement or funding pitch, letter writing, an educational blog, or writing a children’s book. I’ve chosen a few of my favorites to share.

Erminia Gonzalez:The Day Money Quit”Book titled 'The day money quit'

The first make that really spoke to me was The Day Money Quit by Erminia Gonzalez. This story was so much fun to read. Erminia chose to write about a topic that everyone in our class can relate to… money. I like how this story was modeled after the mentor texts and used letter writing. She appeals to the readers logos by demonstrating the flaws of digital money. Because of the relatabillity and use of tactics that grab the reader’s attention, I fully enjoyed reading this short story and was totally convinced that cash money is the superior currency.   

Allison House

This was super cute. Through letter writing Allison does a great job convincing the reader that Summer is best! I thought it was very smart how she began by addressing the shortcomings of Fall, Winter, and Spring and ended with the many reasons why Summer is the best season.

 I also like how she borrowed the use of a creative sign-off (The Amazing, Fun, and Best Season of ALL) to further her argument. Creative, convincing, and delightful to read.

Beatriz Salazar

Happy, Healthy, Super Teeth!

Book titled 'Happy, healthy, super teeth!'

This children’s book was great because it used information about the four different types of teeth to convince you of the importance of keeping them clean. Knowing the significance of each of the teeth we have provides the strongest argument for why it is ever important to have adequate oral hygiene. I love that Beatriz was able to incorporate expository writing into her argumentative piece this week, because it adds to the story and as we’ve learned, rarely is a text only one genre. The pictures are also very cute and help the reader understand the content. Well done Beatriz.    

Author Bio: My name is Erin Russo. I’m a returning student with hopes of becoming an elementary school teacher. I’m passionate about education, and hope to have the opportunity to give all children in my classroom an opportunity to find joy in learning. My husband and I are raising our two young daughters in Lincoln, CA where we enjoy walking to our neighborhood park, home improvement projects, and hosting our family and friends.  


Sean Gamer

“While they are in this living-with-an-idea part of the process, they grow their thinking about the idea by collecting all sorts of related, random thoughts and sometimes by writing reflectively and extensively about the idea” (About The Authors 64).

Our make cycles this week were inspired by argumentative writing. It was our challenge as students to explore the ways to persuade an audience to think a certain way. As future educators, it is important to understand the art of argumentative writing because it is apart of California’s standards as well as Common Core.

The students in our class were asked to examine Andrea Lunsford’s article “Our Semi-Literate Youth? Not So Fast” (something our class has used in the past), I Wanna Iguana and I Wanna New Room by Karen Kaufman Orloff, Click, Clack, Moo, Cows That Type by Doreen Cronin, and The Day the Crayons Quit by Drew Daywalt.

As future teachers, it is important to keep on the lookout for new writing ideas for our students. I think these books create a sense of activism for students. Teaching students skills to negotiate and see other points of views can build argument and encourage research for students’ personal ideas and beliefs. There so many wonderful makes in this make cycle. At first, I did not understand what argumentative writing was. Then after reading the mentor text and the chapters from the textbook, I began to understand. Seeing my classmate’s makes also helped me understand as well.

It is an honor to be apart of this online class. Our Google+ community is creative and informative. Sometimes I learn more from looking through classmates’ makes. Learning independently and later collaborating with others makes digesting information easier. Raenni Pilgrim’s Pineapple ads caught my eye. Her idea behind the pineapple of being aesthetically appealing to viewers and having a positive message of anti-bullying is revolutionary because we are a society of saying no and keeping all the sad things in our world under the rug and never talking about them. Thank you for creating this Raenni!

I also enjoyed Hannah Hugh’s Smore campaign on giving less homework. She explained to our classmate that she was happy to use Smore instead of defaulting to StoryJumper. I loved the reasons she used to justify her reasoning behind giving less homework and she created an outstanding compelling argument. The pictures she used also added emotion to readers when they read the reason behind why teachers should give less homework. Good job Hannah! 

Author Bio: My name is Sean Gamer. When I am not in the classroom, I love to be outside playing tennis with friends, hiking the trails of Upper Park in Chico, and reading books. I am a senior at Chico State and plan on entering the credential program and becoming an elementary school teacher. I love animals and someday want to go to Australia.